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The Deadly Rapture of Love

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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Katt
Review:
Whoa!! Intense heh... Loved it... so even though it is "done" ...more please lol

Katt
Comments from author:
Thanks! If I think of something I'll write it.
Review By [Katt] • Date [2 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Very intense. Was it supposed to be Obi-Wan Kenobi narrating?
Comments from author:
It was supposed to be Obi-Wan in the first chapter and Giles in the second, but I didn't worry too much about trying to get Obi's character and speech patterns, so in that sense it was pretty bad, but I was going for that point of view. Thanks.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Pilay
Review:
I love your immortal Buffy obsession please keep it up :)
Comments from author:
No worries there, even if I joke about it. Thanks!
Review By [Pilay] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from randyzoopurple
Review:
omg so fucken good
Comments from author:
Thanks randyzoopurple!
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [31 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Wow.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [23 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Avantre
Review:
Poor Leia, even prophecies ignore that she's also the offspring of her parents.
Comments from author:
I've got her making an appearance in the next part of that story. To be updated I don't know when, but she's in it.
Review By [Avantre] • Date [13 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Selonianth
Review:
A bit too much tell and very little show but still... well done. It tells a story.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I was feelin a bit angsty that day, it's a fair excuse for that story, but I don't have any explanation for the other stories.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [13 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Lovely!!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
great one shot!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [11 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NutsContract
Review:
There needs to be more of this!! I hope they get reunited!
Comments from author:
I'll see what I can do, but no promises about them being reunited. Noted for other stories, though, thanks.
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
What do I think. Now I'm depressed. To lift my depression you should write another one with probably a happy end.

And really I'm not trying to make you feel guilty so you would write another one. I really am not doing that.

Darn good story very good writing.
Comments from author:
Ah, but not everything can have a happy ending, and besides, Star Wars sort of gives the happy ending with Luke, but Buffy and Anakin? Nah, that can't end well can it? Not in this story. Maybe later I'll try a different story with a happier ending, but I've got all those other ones already. Thanks!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Damn, that was pretty frakkin' intense! This needs to be continued, no way should this be left as a one-shot...
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'll see what I can do, no promises.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NamelessCritic
Review:
It is a good story, but it needs a sequel.
Comments from author:
I'll try, other than Giles perspective, any ideas? I've got some stuff written, but no promises. Thanks for the review.
Review By [NamelessCritic] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Doodle
Review:
Excellent chapter. 1,000/10


The anger/lostness Buffy felt in canon? That would be a candle fire compared to the forest fire or sun scorched planet this Buffy would feel at the ones who brought her back. You really wouldn't want to be them when she's through with them.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm sure it would be much worse, I'll see what comes of it.
Review By [Doodle] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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