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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
I know I've reviewed this over on FFN, bit I feel the need to reiterate how I loved where Buffy *saw* Tom. Not just his looks or his rumored charisma or his opportunistic posturing, bit *him*. And that he was wrong. And that she saw what he did to his soul, even if she doesn't understand that bit yet. So thank you for sharing and I look forward to more.

CT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [3 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Aista
Review:
Interesting. Good characterisation.
Review By [Aista] • Date [26 Feb 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from draconis
Review:
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Excellent start. Very much looking forward to more. So many ways this could go in 1945 and 2003 timelines and your demonstrated ability to craft the scenes and portray the characters should make it a wonderful read.

Loved the, "What have you done to your soul?". Way out of left-field but a tremendous hook. As likely to intrigue Tom as deeply to concern him, and I could easily feel Buffy's shock at that observation.

I could see see this going sideways either way with Buffy being drawn to the 'Dark Side' or Tom being drawn more to the Light...maybe a bit of both? Tom's raw power with his innate darkness tempered a bit by Buffy, and Buffy doing a "Let's get dangerous" thing would make them an incredibly powerful and effective pair: politically, magically, and even more effective against demons, and now in-the-future Glory, and the First (something that might draw in Buffy). Perhaps a glimpse of the possible re-aligned badness foreseen in Buffy's dreams as the present and future are changed?

Anyway, not looking for answers in this comment. Just idle thoughts.
Review By [draconis] • Date [16 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Lolaisawesome
Review:
Holy shit! Excellent cliffhanger!
I am so happy that a great author is showing an interest in this pairing. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

When the idea hit me a while back, I just saw sparks flying and promptly decided I needed to write this. Up until now though, the only thing I'd ever written was a 450 word drabble, so that's partly why I am a slow updater.

I hope to get the next chapter completed soon!
Review By [Lolaisawesome] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Wandmaker
Review:
Love this story and the unique chemistry you've created between the younger Voldemort and Buffy. The idea of them both being able to see into each other's mind is fascinating.

I'm also a fan of stories where good and evil isn't all black and white.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [Wandmaker] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from SSanchez
Review:
I like the way you worked out Buffy's power vs Toms. She isn't all powerful, but she can hold her own too. Makes it a bit more realistic, and I can see how he would be intrigued by it, and her. It's also nice that she holds her ground and tells him what she thinks of him entering her mind without permission, especially after the peeping while unconscious earlier! I like getting his thoughts too, and getting to know Tom Riddle. Great chapter, look forward to the next!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [SSanchez] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from isugirl
Review:
Very interesting chapter. I like how tom kept getting side tracked with other thoughts while trying to deal with her. It'll be interesting to see how he reacts to buffy knowing there's something wrong with him and that he isn't always on the side of good. I was so happy to see you updated and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!

I'm working to keep him in character, while keeping in mind that he's still just eighteen here.
Review By [isugirl] • Date [9 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DuskyDushku
Review:
Amazing so far!!! Decadently written, I can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [DuskyDushku] • Date [9 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Sinangeled
Review:
Holy crap this chapter was amazing. I am very very excited to read more, and hope another update comes soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you!

I was a little nervous because there is not very much action, and it's mostly one character, so I probably obsessed over it a lot more than necessary.

I've got a chunk of the next chapter started, I just have to check my outline to see if I can shift a scene or two around so that it isn't too short.
Review By [Sinangeled] • Date [9 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from tart
Review:
Only 3 chapters in and it already looking like this is going to be an amazing fic. Can't wait to see what comes next!
Review By [tart] • Date [15 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Lolaisawesome
Review:
Wow. I certainly didn't see that coming. I thought the redhead was Willow cause the whole magic but it was a pleasant surprise.
Can't wait to see more of this story, hopefully soon!
Review By [Lolaisawesome] • Date [14 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
So I will admit it I am curious about where you are going to go with this. Also wondering how you are going to approach the whole time paradox thing. There are so many theories; so many ways you could do it. anywho keep up the good work.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [14 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SSanchez
Review:
Awesome. The writing's good, the story is interesting, and I want to know what happens. Wish I was this good, anyway, thanks again, and I look forward to the next chapter!
Review By [SSanchez] • Date [14 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)thetwitmachine
Review:
Enjoying this fic so far, and you're updating it very quickly which is always nice (and something I am incapable of).

Keep going!
Comments from author:
Hah. Yeah, err, confession time. I've had the first two chapters on ffnet since May. Between surgery, work, kids, and a major brain block over how exactly chapter 3 needed to play out, it took six months to get over the hump.

BUT--the next chapter is already in progress, and I have quite a bit of the overall plot mapped out.
Review By [(Current Donor)thetwitmachine] • Date [14 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from randyzoopurple
Review:
omg
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [14 Nov 13] • Not Rated
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