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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting if a bit thin. Keep up the good work, whatever it may be.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [23 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
@Gideon:

Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. has the full blown mystery going re: Phil Coulson. Hill has said outright Phil is not to know what actually happened, his old partner says he moves differently, it's a big deal.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [22 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EdBecerra
Review:
Army of clones? I'm sorry, but I don't quite get the reference. I know he's had a cameo in every movie due to his contract, but the hint that there's something more has gone over my head. Might I ask what the mystery is?

Aside from that, I like the story as it stands, and wouldn't mind seeing it become the start of a new series.
Comments from author:
those cameos where he plays someone different in each? okay many of them can be just one person whos lucky enough to be around for loads of stuff

anyway it was just poking fun at his cameos, really. That and a suggestion I saw on Spacebattles: he's uatu.

this was done for two reasons - one, get it out of my system (as you can see that I just did it barebones writing) and two, I wrote a challenge on it and that still wasn't enough so I had to ofcourse, answer the challenge I set. minimally.
Review By [EdBecerra] • Date [21 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ovid
Review:
Personally, I demand more. doing only one chapter of this is a serious tease, and you are a cruel, cruel writer if this is all we get. It's like tasting the greatest brownie in the universe, and when you reach for another, the baker says "nah, that's all you get." It is impossible to stay at one brownie!!!

please, feed your readers addiction. We beg of you.

(I'd have gone for the "please sir, can I have some more?" line, but I'm neither cute nor starving :D )
Comments from author:
unfortunately, I have the same.. er... relationship... with my muse.

For she is a cruel mistress, and I her lowly typing servant, is but nothing to her beyond a trained monkey, and lo this monkey has wishes, she cares not.

;)
Review By [ovid] • Date [21 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Cool idea. Of course it could be fleshed out a LOT :)
I didn't get the thing about Tahiti though, is that where he caught up with Phil?
Comments from author:
it's an Agents of SHIELD thing, post-Avengers. (suggesting phil still died in the film)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EnergyBeing
Review:
Firstly, you need to have a proper synopsis, because the one you have is against the rules.

Secondly, proofread, because there are so many mistakes here that could easily be picked up. Some mistakes are acceptable, but this many are not.

Thirdly, I could not follow this plot. In fact, there didn't appear to be a plot. In short, there was no point writing this.
Review By [EnergyBeing] • Date [21 Nov 13] • Not Rated
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