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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from twlight
Review:
This is a wonderful wonderful wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review.
Review By [twlight] • Date [13 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from myrddyn
Review:
ok that was very cool! i'm really looking forward to that sequel!
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm slowly working on it and will post it upon completion
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [21 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Edman
Review:
Good story
Looking forward to the sequel.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Review By [Edman] • Date [11 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from lastjuan
Review:
This story is nice. The premise and the development is very well written. The only thing that had left a bit disoriented is some of the jumps. I'm very interested in possible sequels.
Comments from author:
The sequel will be better (I hope) as it will be more my storyline with the X-Men stuff interspersed.
The problem with the first two seasons of the show was the arc was pretty much set in stone.

Thank you for the review
Review By [lastjuan] • Date [7 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bill
Review:
So very well done!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review
Review By [Bill] • Date [2 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from draconis
Review:
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Good story and well written. Was a bit frustrated by all the jumping around in the story. Could have been a bit more cohesive with more details in each segment...might have helped make the transitions a bit easier to deal with. Not sure. For example, I think there could have been a lot more written about the process of Alex and Raven becoming friends, details of what they talked about, how Alexander started bringing her around, the reader watching as Raven began to accept him, more on Irene/Raven interactions, etc. The reader had to take a lot on faith and make a lot of assumptions.

I also would have liked seeing more of Alexander's discussions with various mutants about being more aggressive in their "negotiations" and understanding collateral damage during confrontations with humans. You started with Alex at first wanting to do so, but then kind of just left it up in the air.

Like another reader, I too am wondering why Sinister wasn't sent into deep space/the sun...although if he isn't sent into a deep gravity well (e.g. Sol or Jupiter) I'd assume he'd eventually find his way back somehow.

Looking forward to the sequel.


EDIT: Response to Author's comment on Sinister
I do understand the desire to 'keep bad guy around' for future use...but it can run the risk of an author making otherwise smart 'good guy' characters look deeply stupid from both tactical and strategic perspectives. One uses all available assets to the best of one's abilities/knowledge to never leave an unreasoning deadly enemy with the ability to re-engage one or one's friends/allies. (I think even the Evil Overlord Handbook has something like that in it.) Still a quite good story.
Comments from author:
The simple reason is, you never "Really" get rid of a great villian who can cause so much trouble like Sinister.
Tempting as it might be, I may need him later so it is easier to keep him available just in case.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [draconis] • Date [15 Feb 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from JaCee
Review:
I enjoyed the story immensely, but I'm still fuzzy on how the day in CH. 13 got retconned. Maybe I am a bit slow, but I didn't get it.

Oh, and I think Alex would have walked over to the Green Goblin and smacked him a couple of times muttering something about "cockblocking metahumans" and screwing up his date. Something to make him think a bit more before committing what amounts to terrorist acts on people trying to get lucky.

Looking forward to the sequel!
Comments from author:
LOL that's an interesting idea and might happen to the next fool who interrupts his date.
As far as Chapter 13 goes.
Bishop originally appears and tells them about the plague, a lot of the same things happen without Cables involvement, however the end is what happened with the team being vaporized.
Cable showing up retcons the entire universe.
I probably could have cleared that a bit better.
Review By [JaCee] • Date [9 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great story with well written fun and action.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your reviews
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Omegaprime
Review:
Now that was a nice ending to this story.

But now I'm a bit afraid that if/when Mr. Sinister gets free he might try to give Xander a terminal examination.

I just loved that Magneto was shocked by someone thanking him but it could've been the first time he has been complemented by someone in his life.

Now Rukus, if he survived, will probably scared of women now thanks to Xander.

I had a thought that, if you want to use this, Green Goblin might want to find Xander and take revenge on him so one time he spots Xander driving and follows him home, then he finds out that he lives at the X-mansion.

GG: Oh Hell no, I'm not fighting him here.

Please keep up the good work.


Edit: Then Spiderman would be entertained by the X-Men chasing a freaked out Green Goblin. Then in the morning the Daily Bugle will be showing a picture of the Green Goblin that is about to soil his green tights being attacked by the X-Men.

LOL.
Comments from author:
Goblin showing up at the mansion would be entertaining, especially if he interrupted Storm and X again...
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
Fate could make it a three...never mind. keep up the good work and looking forward to the next one
Comments from author:
She said HE is no longer under her control...
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great ending to a great story, thanks!

Tom.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the update, I really look forward to the sequel.

-When Alex/Xander calls Storm "My Lady" is that his nickname for her because she used to be worshiped as a goddess?
Comments from author:
Nickname mostly, term of endearment.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Raider
Review:
very well wrapped up!
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [Raider] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Eureka
Review:
Good, then I SHOULD have net back by the time you have the sequel out. I loved this story and can only hope that the next is up to this standard.
Comments from author:
You better and I will do my best, if anything I hope to improve upon it.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [6 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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