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The Making of Bilis Manger

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Review of chapter "Preview for Season 3" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Good layers of chaos. I am glad Seo was able to project back across her personal timeline as well as the rift. Definitely shaped up nicely
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [28 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preview for Season 3" from Mcspender
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Well, now that Seo's PTSD is in the open at least they can treat her and get her to stand still for a while.
Ah yeah, and Jack is way cool =D!!!.
The previews are awesome =D!!. I really wanna see the part where the Knights of Byzantium are involved, why do I think that a looot of boom is going to be used on them xD??.

Cool fic, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preview for Season 3" from EasterCat
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Your series has been wonderful thus far. I am excited about the next installment.

Thanks for all your wonderful work.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Mcspender
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Well, that's what he get for being such an attention whore, turning into a ghost. A more satisfying fate that the one He got in cannon, where he got away.
I hope Buffy's headeaches are not the same ones that killed Joyce :S.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
I was worried that the fate I came up with for Bilis Manger was too harsh. But after he went back in time and nearly destroyed the world just so he could kill Jack for good, it's probably a lot more fair.

Next Season has two big story arcs. One is focused on a character I'll introduce in the first story, who's dubbed "Sunglasses". The second is Buffy's illness.

Just wait and see...
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [26 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Dmitri
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Well, that was a bumpy and confusing ride. And Buffy may've inherited Joyce's health problems as well, it seems.
Comments from author:
Poor Buffy.

You'll get more on her headaches next Season.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [26 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Mcspender
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And that is what an abuser like Billy boy deserves, ooh yeah =D.
It was very cool to see Seo's saying no more, both to Billy and to her worse nature.
I think this song fits with this chapter http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6kBZNToS5Y

Merry Christmas =)!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [25 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Dmitri
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Well, this is an exciting story so far. Can't wait and see what'll happen next!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I wanted something action-packed and exciting for a season finale!
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [24 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Mcspender
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Billy, Billy, Billy, lesson numero 1: Never underestimate someone who's related to the Doctor, because they have plans.
Number two lesson: Seo's cheats, a lot.
This is gonna be epic xD!!.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!
Comments from author:
Seo cheats! Ha! Love it!

Maybe that should be Seo's rule number one.

The Doctor lies.

And Seo cheats.

Hurray!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [24 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Mcspender
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Then got to her feet, helped Dawn up. "Okay," Buffy confessed. "On second thought, I could see blowing up the universe for that."

That's what I like about the Summers: they're never afraid to go all the way when something o someone needs to be killificated =D!.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [23 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Awesome. I love it when artifacts can be assembled to form a plan.

... I think that's what I mean... :)

Nice save by Buffy and Alison.

So, the bomb rewound the universe, but not Seo's personal timeline, so she's older and the stuff she set in motion still happened, but she's physically where she remembers a younger Seo having been? Heh, I wonder how old she'll be by episode's end.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [23 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Mcspender
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May MacGyver and Murphy protect Alison making the Time Car!!!.
Of course a good mechanic could be useful too xD.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [22 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Mcspender
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At least Seo got away from Billy, but the thing is gonna be finding Dawn before she makes a mistake :S.
Nice cliffhanger xD!!.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
See what happens next!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [21 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Mcspender
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Damn, poor Seo =(. She knows about being abused, but she can't get away from Bill, and I'm really glad that she's not pregnant :S.

Any chance to see what's Dawn planning to rescue Seo???.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [20 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from CaptJohnHart
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This is heading toward the old adage of "Double the pleasure, Double the fun"
Review By [CaptJohnHart] • Date [20 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Mcspender
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So basically Seo's being manipulated...daamn =(.
And yeah, it's time for Dawn to step up to the plate, Go Dawn =D!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [19 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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