Review of chapter "part six: pure" from Katrina
This was quite lovely. It captures an "essence," of Luna that I really appreciated. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Thank you, Katrina. The original prompt called for Luna using things she had learned in class in an unconventional way, but I think I went in a bit of a different direction (it seems I have a tendency to that with prompts (*grins*). But, especially where Luna is concerned, and I have written her in so many ways already, I like to try to find things I -haven't- done yet. I am especially heartened by your comment that although, it might be different in a stylistic sense, it has that Luna "essence".
Thanks again for taking the time to review.
Review By [Katrina
] • Date [20 Dec 13] • Not Rated