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Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from WhippingDawn
Review:
Ho. Ly. Crap.

This is exactly the kind of story I hate, and yet I loved reading it. But no sequel please. ;)

When I read the beginning I decided to wait until it was complete, and I'm glad I did. A very powerful story, beautifully written as usual. Congrats!
Comments from author:
Oh no there won't be a sequel!

Thank-you,
D.
Review By [WhippingDawn] • Date [25 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from eriktheviking
Review:
What a well written dark story, an especially nice touch at the end for those who play GOD.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.
D.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from EasterCat
Review:
I normally don't read death fics, but I knew you'd write something that was more interesting than the others.
I look forward to your next work.
Comments from author:
Thank-you,
D.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [12 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Buffy Summers, avenger of humankind...just goes to say, what goes around comes around three times over...most cases anyway. This just blew up in the aliens' faces in such a big way.

Edit/Reply 12JAN2014: Aye...if the aliens were so advanced in knowledge, then they should probably have remembered "What thou send out comes back to thee, so ever mind the Rule of Three."

Somehow that just doesn't quite describe how many times it came back to them...now does it, my polytheistic friend?
Comments from author:
She was just doing her job...good old Buffy.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [12 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from CrystalBlaze
Review:
If the hivemind virus evolves beyond killing hosts, I suspect Earth gets to start all over, with the addition of the Guardian Spirit, the virus that acts like a vengeful, mostly benevolent mitochondrial partner in whatever life comes to pass.

It'll probably think of itself as Slayer.
Comments from author:
Its a thought.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [12 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from cyberfish
Review:
I must say that this story was well thought out and well written.you idea to have the worlds vampire and human populations be destroyed by an alien virus and the the world it self destroyed by an living starship self destructing because of the virus was very creative and original. I don`t like death fics so i can not honestly say I enjoyed it ,but I can and will say it was a very good story.I look forward to reading more of your stories,I think that I will enjoy them.Thank you
Comments from author:
Thank-you. This story was a bit out of character, I hope you enjoy the other stuff I've written or will write.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [11 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from DieselDriver
Review:
So... What evolves next? There are still lots of viri on the Earth, intelligent hive mind. Should be able to extrapolate how to build a space ship. Go visit the aliens on all their home and colony worlds. So yeah, everyone dies... EVERYONE!
Comments from author:
I don't think I'd want to visit Earth if the Virus continues to evolve. It won't belong before it has language skills and starships!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Mcspender
Review:
Buffy did good and passed her death sentence to the aliens, but Ship did an outstanding job being the executioner of miss Summers final revenge with her black hole trick.
Farewell ship, you served with honor and at the end, you served Justice beyond the call of duty.

Any chance to see the Stargate guys kicking the G.O.D.'s guys butts??.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.

PS. Bio war is baaad :S!!!.
Comments from author:
Wouldn't work, sorry. As written in the books GOD was a galaxy spanning civilisation more so than the Goa'uld ever were...think of them as like the Ancients.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [11 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from stardrow
Review:
a very well written and riveting horror...and a good warning to STAY AWAY FROM BIO WARFARE...it never ends well
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

D.
Review By [stardrow] • Date [10 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fanreaderonetwo
Review:
Despite the title, I wasn't expecting an "everybody dies" story.

I don't like serious downers like that, one reason I was annoyed by the 1990s "Outer Limits" TV series. It was a good show but its makers seemed addicted to major downer endings.

Hopefully you have it out of your system.
Comments from author:
Oh yeah I'm off the 'everyone dies' trip now. I'm going on the 'only a few people die' trip now!
;-)

Cheers,
D.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [10 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from (Moderator)acs
Review:
Have to say that I prefer this kind of grim ending to the kind of story that drags the character suffering on, and on, and on.

And did Buffy REALLY die at the end? Or did she go into a coma until her Slayer uber healing fixed her? (I think I'll pretend that's what "really" happened, and some day she'll meet up with other survivors - like Skynet.) :-)
Comments from author:
Hmmm, well the way I wrote it she's dead...but! Like you say she might have slipped into a coma and it wasn't really her brain shutting down.

Buffy in a devastated world? I'm sure there's an xover there.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [10 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from CPTSkip
Review:
Well... That wasn't real jolly. I look forward to a bit more levity in your next story. Of course a story about the Black Death killing off 90% of humanity would have more laughs than this story. Not one of my favorites, but it was well written.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Next story to post is a toss-up between a 'HELP!' xover or a 'Carry On Up the Khyber' xover. Hopefully they'll have you chuckling.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Well, thanks for not having a Fuzzy God ending anyway.
Comments from author:
Good grief never do that, I'm not an American you know!?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [10 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from OlBear
Review:
A bit too dark for my taste, I've never really enjoyed 'Everyone dies!' stories but a well written tale regardless, thank you for sharing.
Comments from author:
Only done this one and I doubt I'll do another (been there done that). As I say next posted story will be funnier with only the bad guys dying!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [10 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from jimk
Review:
If it were truly everyone dies, you should have had them go back to the Academy and then infect everyone. If you're going for an everyone dies ending it seems kind of lame at this point to not nail the whole galaxy. Would have been more poetic also since they were the ones who approved it and their culture caused the Hellmouth problem to start with. It made Buffy's revenge kind of incomplete at least to me.
Comments from author:
This was one of the options for the end...everyone gets the finger! However for various reasons I rejected it.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [jimk] • Date [10 Jan 14] • Not Rated
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