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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from serbob
Review:
So good! can't wait to read the rest of it!
Review By [serbob] • Date [21 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from TroyGuffey
Review:
And the Jedi are LATE! (But they ARE here.....) People would fight HARD to retain the powers and skills of a Jedi. (or a Sith :( )
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [15 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from reiite
Review:
Great chapter and nice style change. Cant wait for more
Review By [reiite] • Date [15 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from disregard
Review:
Interesting and quite unexpected then again that's what I like in stories I read. I would like to see were you take this story. Are you going to cross it over with any other reality/universe?
Review By [disregard] • Date [15 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh dear. Great chapter!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [15 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from AnFan
Review:
Interesting format. I'm guessing that there was a lot more that he 'saw' but that these were along the path that he followed.

I also find myself wondering just what he could make plans for. Aaannnddd, just had a thought. And not a real happy thought for Xander or Buffy. That thought being that he could see the possibility that if he got Buffy pregnant that there would be Farseers in the future, and his kids to carry on in this world... See, not happy for them. It seems to be what you are hinting at with Angel's musings taken as foreshadowing. Dru's seeings could be interpreted this way also. Though the motivations are not clear to me. Unless Xander's character is thinking he will cease to exist when the spell ends, and not return to another dimension.

Well, it will be interesting to see what happens next. Thanks for the update.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [15 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
heheh interesting, this should be good.

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh I love it, I will be following this fic to see where you go with this!

Thanks for a great story so far!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [19 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from reiite
Review:
Great stuff! Keep it comin!
Review By [reiite] • Date [19 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Dragonwolftiger
Review:
Weell it helps if you aren't IN the Warhammer universe, Cop'lann. *snicker* it usually helps to have a Slayer on your side as well. Good fic, please continue. Oh don't apologize for being late I figure it's like any writing it's ready when its ready - unless its an english assignment and its two weeks overdue *snicker*
Comments from author:
Thanks for understanding. On to the next installment!
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [19 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Frardowin
Review:
Overall, I think the story is a decent crossover, but it kind of looks like most of your information is coming from 1d4 chan. (the Eldrad being s dick was a dead give away)

You have the dating system mostly correct if you want to use it completely properly you can find the system here: http://warhammer40k.wikia.com/wiki/Imperial_Dating_System

You can also find anything 40k on that wiki.
Comments from author:
A late reply is always better then none at all, I hope. While I have read a few things from 1D4chan, yes, the Eldrad being a dick thing is my little hommage to it, I did use warhammer40K.wikia as my main source of information for this fic. Luckily the Imperial dating system won't be needed for this fic anymore. Might come in handy for the next one I'm working on though.

Thanks for your kind review and suggestion.
Review By [Frardowin] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from michaelangelo
Review:
Isn't Mon-Keigh is a tad overused in that chapter?
Comments from author:
I can't fault you in that analysis. I guess I was in love with that term when I wrote it.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from xon
Review:
A link to the Imperial Dating System (http://warhammer40k.wikia.com/wiki/Imperial_Dating_System).
Review By [xon] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
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