Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

Buffy Beckett and Slayerfest 2014

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "I am What I am and so are you" from Linauri
Review:
I'm torn. There are elements to both versions that I love. If I have to choose, though, I think I'd follow this version. Somehow it just seems bit more fleshed out than the first version you wrote, more detailed. I really hope you decide to make this a full story one day soon.
Comments from author:
The second one actually comes with a plot that I think I can manage, the first was sort of the spark that I should maybe have waited on, but I'm glad its up and the encouragement sort of helped me flesh out the second story. Not ready to commit to a really long story, but I won't leave it hanging. I'll finish it off in a few chapters and maybe write another one in the same universe. Thanks for the comment!
Review By [Linauri] • Date [2 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I am What I am and so are you" from AndreaMaine
Review:
It's building and I like it.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [1 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I am What I am and so are you" from Wormbait
Review:
I think I prefer the second version of your Buffy with Jack's memories story, it seems to run more smoothly and the first one had a little much denial from Jack, I mean yeah people could have bugged him his whole life and kept records of everything he said and did but why would they?

Poor Giles, some needs to get revenge for that injustice. So Xander, being non magic inclined just had fading memories, I wonder what Willow came away from Halloween with? If she went as a ghost that could make keeping her a prisoner hard if she manages to tap into the whole intangible thing. Or did she go as something different as Buffy did?

Well done and thanks for sharing, I look forward to reading more of your offerings.
Comments from author:
I hadn't thought of Willow and the ghost. That could be interesting, or maybe she goes as something since Buffy did, thanks for that. It might make the end of this little series a lot more fun to write. Revenge will be had for Giles. Thanks!
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I am What I am and so are you" from Rich
Review:
I like both versions of the "Buffy is Jack" story, but I think I like the second one a little better; of course the main difference between them is really Buffy herself - Buffy at 19 is different from Buffy at 16. I also like the "portrait of a hero" stories, and the Slayerfest stories.

It's too bad that it probably isn't possible to combine those three stories into one, because it would be an epic.
Review By [Rich] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I am What I am and so are you" from Rich
Review:
I like both versions of the "Buffy is Jack" story, but I think I like the second one a little better; of course the main difference between them is really Buffy herself - Buffy at 19 is different from Buffy at 16. I also like the "portrait of a hero" stories, and the Slayerfest stories.

It's too bad that it probably isn't possible to combine those three stories into one, because it wouild be an epic.
Comments from author:
It would be fun to combine the three, but I think it would be easier with I am what I am and slayerfest. The Portrait of a hero would be weirder with Buffy and Daniel, but the idea is good, maybe I can combine the first two. Thanks for the idea, and the review!
Review By [Rich] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I am What I am and so are you" from (Current Donor)wizathogwarts
Review:
This is a great idea and start. Pleas continue this.
Comments from author:
I will, lots to work with, thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)wizathogwarts] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I am What I am and so are you" from Luhh
Review:
Try a LOT better! Really good job there! Liked a lot more! The other one had a good idea but was way to fast and kind of felt like you had just dumped all your ideas in one go, this one is much more smut. You should keep it going!
I would really like to see Buffy reacting to Sam. Like, really, truly reacting. Considering she has Jack's memorys it would be fun seeing acting attracted, maybe awkward and/or flirty, and Sam's reaction to that. And everyone else's.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I completely agree. The Sam Buffy Jack triangle would be hilarious or completely ridiculous, but I'm going to write it anyway.
Review By [Luhh] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I am What I am and so are you" from randyzoopurple
Review:
So cool
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Portrait of Hero" from spk
Review:
Such interesting tales you share.
I loved everyone that's there.
I hope you'll add more soon
because they give my day such a boon. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks beyond compare
So glad I could ensnare
I'll try to update in the afternoon
And not sound like a loony tune.)
Review By [spk] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Portrait of Hero" from lateVMlover
Review:
Some really great lines in this. "Was this a portrait of a hero after the war?" That's a provocative and interesting thought. Loved this line, too: "It was Angel that taught her how to love and be loved in an endless war, but Spike taught her to love the war." I liked it because it was true, but I had never consciously thought of it.

Are you going to continue to do stand alones are write a full story? I'd love to see a story because your writing is really good.
Comments from author:
Thank you I really appreciate it. I am going to continue to write both kinds of stories. I haven't been able to finish a longer story yet, so I hesitate to commit to another one, but I'm going to make two or three of these into longer series at least because they're stuck in my head and I've had a lot of fun imagining where these things go. Thanks again!
Review By [lateVMlover] • Date [8 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Being Jack" from LadyHecate
Review:
I would love to read this as a full story! LOL jack in Buffy's brain. That is scary!!
Comments from author:
Thanks, scary, but fun to write!
Review By [LadyHecate] • Date [7 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Being Jack" from Sahugani
Review:
I really think I would like to see this one made into a full fledged fic.

I do want to nit pic one thing though. While i don't think she'd completely reject Buffy's story(at least to her face) I think Carter would be desperately trying to get Demons and magic to conform to her scientific view of reality. Clark's law and suggesting that the demon's were extradimensional aliens or some such.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I am writing a lot for a Buffy with the mind of Jack story, though I think the one I have here will stand alone, or maybe get one or two more chapters depending on what I do with the other story, but I have another one started that I'm liking better. As for the Carter thing, I completely agree with you, and if I continue to write a story like this, that will probably be an aspect of it. If I do continue to write this story, please point out any ooc things I miss. It helps a lot, and I'm still new to the Stargate world.
Review By [Sahugani] • Date [9 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Being Jack" from docfeng
Review:
jack meets thor loki meets jack and buffy mini jack and dawn showup
Comments from author:
Yeah, I like the Dawn part of that, and mini Jack, and I could work something around that. Let me think about it for a while. I've got a couple chapters written out for another Buffy has Jack's mind story that I like better, but I'll give this idea a go too. Thanks!
Review By [docfeng] • Date [27 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Being Jack" from locard
Review:
I love chapter 7 the best and I hope you start it as a full lenght story.
Comments from author:
Thanks I'm tossing it around, thinking about plot. If you've got any good plot ideas you think I could try, I'll do it. Thank!
Review By [locard] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Being Jack" from jebbypal
Review:
(And my muse loves it but has never done Buffy or sg1 before. But if it glows on to hard, I'd give you heads up credit everything, but personally I think you are knocking your own skills and look forward to what you come up with)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [jebbypal] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Page: 1 of 2 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking