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Review of chapter "Sacrifice" from TorturedAngel
Review:
cool start :)
Review By [TorturedAngel] • Date [7 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sacrifice" from leb
Review:
this is good, please write more. I want to know about harry growing up with xander, dumbles reaction to harry being missing (and how long it takes him to find out), ect
Comments from author:
Thanks and I did it. Hope you like it
Review By [leb] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sacrifice" from RamiNeko
Review:
A very good start! Sad everyone in his home verse had such a rotten end though.
Comments from author:
Well, who could live without Xander
Review By [RamiNeko] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sacrifice" from LordCorwin
Review:
A good start, but only 1 slight NIT --- Where's the disclaimer ...
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [2 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sacrifice" from slmncpm
Review:
i would have loved if you had continued this!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [2 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sacrifice" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story, this has lots of potential. Please continue it if you can!

Tom.
Comments from author:
Thanks and I have
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [2 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sacrifice" from Rich
Review:
Interesting variation. I like the way you imply the backstory without dumping it on the reader all at once - not that there's anything wrong with info dumps, but this story didn't really need one.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I thought I'd try something new for this
Review By [Rich] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sacrifice" from TheKnightofFaerie
Review:
Interesting story so far. But why is it marked 'complete'? There's clearly more to be told in this tale.
Comments from author:
Thanks and its a series. I'm not great with multi chapters so I'm turning this until multi stories instead
Review By [TheKnightofFaerie] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Not Rated
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