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Review of chapter "Hunt With Me" from (Past Donor)Dianasis
Review:
As much as I loved the story, I think it's missing a little of Kendra's personality and vivre. Where are you placing this in the BTVS timeline?
Comments from author:
Much as I would love to disagree, I didn't feel that I quite got Kendra exactly right in this one. Close enough that I felt she was someone that I could work with writing, someone that I felt worth the effort to play more with, but... but still room for improvement. I hope that my later Kendra-efforts feel more accurate to the character.

I am considering this to be AU/divergent as a what could (maybe, in crossover-land) have happened if she hadn't gone back to Sunnydale during the Acathala mess, and instead had... well, other adventures and destinations. My author's notes for this place Kendra as having been a Slayer for three years at the start of 'Hunt With Me'.
Review By [(Past Donor)Dianasis] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hunt With Me" from DearestDrusilla
Review:
Super cute!
Review By [DearestDrusilla] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hunt With Me" from musiclover
Review:
ok i love hearing about kendra i may like faith but out of all three slayers miss perfect posture is my favorite
Review By [musiclover] • Date [4 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hunt With Me" from Heatherland
Review:
This is really good and i think you wrote Kendra really well except for in some parts where she seemed slightly out of character, but it was still really good and well written.
Review By [Heatherland] • Date [3 Mar 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hunt With Me" from FaceInTheCrowd
Review:
Omg! Sequel, sequel, sequel, SEQUEL! PLEEEAAASE write a sequel!!! This was great. I loved Kendra, and she (and Jamil) deserves some good quality smoochies after all the air-time she DIDN'T get. Please consider a sequel!

-Face
Review By [FaceInTheCrowd] • Date [28 Feb 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hunt With Me" from Hecatonchires
Review:
Poor Kendra, so horribly misused in the series. Good action sequence. No mention of the terrible accent ^_-
Comments from author:
I feel that since her accent was more in the sound of the words and a bit of the way she structured her sentences, if I tried for the structure, the readers could add the pronunciation to their own taste - or not.

And thank you, I always worry about the action sequences.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [3 Feb 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hunt With Me" from (Past Donor)houses
Review:
So nice to see a Kendra fic! I found I particularly liked the idea of pairing her with Jamil, enough that plot bunnies sprang into my head with abandon. Kendra's calm efficiency was nice, her self assurance that a Slayer was all they needed, was refreshing. Jamil's thougths on the subject were in character from what we know of him in the books (albeit entirely too little), and his fascination with Kendra as both hunter and potential mate was very interesting to read. I'm not sure Kendra would have been so comfortable with Jamil the person rather than Jamil the hunter given her extreme shyness around men from canon, but it was still nice to read. A more mature, adjusted Kendra at any rate. Very enjoyable fic.
Comments from author:
oh, plot bunnies for someone else... I'm not sure if I should laugh maniacly or offer my sympathy. Kendra seemed like the sort to think that, as a Slayer, she should be able to handle it - whatever 'it' is. Well, being a Slayer and having suitable weapons.

Considering the little that we do see of Jamail, I figured that Kendra is just the sort that he would go for, or at least, she would be with a bit more maturity than Joss enabled her to gain.

As to how Kendra would react to his interest... that's a whole different question. The interest might not have even become quite obvious to her yet, or she might be deliberately not noticing as a way to try to figure out what to do... The beauty of the whole fic being from Jamail's PoV is that we don't know quite how Kendra would react. We know that Jamail would like one very much, thank you, but what does Kendra want?
Review By [(Past Donor)houses] • Date [2 Feb 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hunt With Me" from Discord
Review:
Cute. Very cute.
Comments from author:
thank you. I wanted a way to do a BtVS/AB crossover that was a little bit different.
Review By [Discord] • Date [2 Feb 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hunt With Me" from Silverfire
Review:
cool suspence

Blairette
Review By [Silverfire] • Date [2 Feb 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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