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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank for the review

Thank you
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from raxadian
Review:
A souped up slayer is HUGE trouble magnet, next thing you know, Apocalypse will want her to be one of his Horsemen. After all, Buffy would make a very good death, since a Slayer with no morals is just a killer.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from raxadian
Review:
I guess you are planing a threesome?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from raxadian
Review:
Overpowered Xander uh? You realize that for everyone to be so scared Xander has to have the power to make Onslaught look like a weakling? Also, Adam was not that powerful. He wasn't made with super-materials like those that exist on Marvel or DC universe. And Logan could have taken it. Unless this is an alternate version of Adam. Plus considering the way they beat him in the TV series, you just have to rip his power source away.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

Not all characters tell the absolute truth. Characters have their own agendas. It's amazing what can be done with a slight variance of the truth.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
Review:
Honesty, there are TONS of mutants, why add fan made characters?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Ah, so a few things are explained, and we get to see a bit of repercussion and... spiderman likes to sleep in.

All in all, a very enjoyable chapter. Thank you. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

I so want to explain but that has to happen in the 'Troubles with families' but there is a fairly detailed explaination in 'Good things come in small packages', if thats any help. I really hope I can get over the stupid mental block i have with 'Troubles'.

Yep, after a night of webslinging the poor guy is tired. Felicia is a cruel cruel woman :)

Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Morgomir
Review:
Great story so far. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ThePureOne
Review:
Finally your back with this story great chapter
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review

This story will continue as will all my others. none will be abandoned.

Thanks again
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [4 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DieselDriver
Review:
Better darn well NOT be the end. GRRRR!!! I want to know what they weren't supposed to do from the one being's point of view and so, now what? Are they both super vampires of a type I don't know anything about?
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review

No it's not the end. In fact its just getting started.

They are not vampires. what they are will be explained in the next couple of chapters of 'The trouble with families'. This is a case of it looks like a duck and quacks like a duck but its a ferret.

And to find out what Xander is going to do that's got Roma so worried. Well it will be in the next chapter. I will tell you that Roma is feeling a very vulnerable at the moment. and you'll find out why several chapters in either this one or 'The trouble with families'
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from removedauthor
Review:
That was an interesting chapter to say the least which made me like all the more. I can't wait to see if you have Xander and Buffy become some kind vampire or some other race. I hope to read the next chapter soon. Have you figured out which realities they are going to go into yet?
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

I haven't quite figured out which realities they will be messing with after marvel. There is one that keeps coming to mind and that's 'DCAU Justice League.' though I'll probably mess with it a little because there are some missing characters. But I'm not sure at the moment. And another one which is pretty much certainty is Stargate SG-1. Apart from those two I have no idea at the moment.

Thanks again for the review.
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [8 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Doodle
Review:
Excellent chapter. 1,000/10


This confuses me:
"and a...she dared not even think it, the name of what the Slayer's young friend had become...It scared her too much to even verbalize their kind. She had seen what happened to powers that had crossed Xander's kind before. They showed no mercy to the power and had destroyed everything that had once been."

What is he now?
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

Oops .. thank you for pointing out my mistake :-)
- I'll fix it next update.

Xander fell in with a family of demon and monster hunters who are a hairs breadth away from being monsters themselves. Their most important rule is never harm innocents. But anyone else that harms innocent mortals are fair game. Xander's main teacher is "older" than the human race. This will be covered in 'The trouble with families' story (once I get over the mental roadblock I'm having with that story.)

I'm glad you liked it

Thank you again for the Review.
Review By [Doodle] • Date [7 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fanreaderonetwo
Review:
If Buffy used The Scythe to slice and dice Adam, where did it come from?

Unless Adam or "Adam Mk II" showed up a couple of seasons later than canon,
it should still be buried.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review

Buffy did not slice Adam up with the Scythe. Buffy was out cold when Adam died.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [7 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DragonBard
Review:
Isn't Xander with Anya at this point?
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

Xander isn't with Anya at the beginning of this story. This will be explained in the story 'The trouble with families', from which this story is based.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [7 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Muroshi
Review:
WTF Fangs for both of them...?
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

Yep, well Buffy will have them by the beginning of chapter 3. (Buffy and Xander are not Vampires)
What happened to Xander will be explained in 'The trouble with families' story. As soon as i can get over the little mental road block I'm having with it. And I'll explain how being transformed effects Buffy's slayer status later in this story.
Review By [Muroshi] • Date [7 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from ThePureOne
Review:
Interesting so have xander ans buffy been changed
Comments from author:
thank you for the review

Xander was changed right after season 3. He met Louise Royston in 'The trouble with families' story. And Buffy has just been changed when she bit Xander. Xander's bite did not change her. His bite merely allowed Buffy to be changed by Xander's blood. Buffy didn't have to bite Xander. It was totally Voluntary, Buffy chose to bite Xander.
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [7 Jan 14] • Not Rated
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