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Review of chapter "Chapter five" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Damn, a good idea done well… Thank you for the effort you put in it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [7 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from Eureka
Review:
"The feeling of safety and security was a welcome one." But unfortunately I do not think it will last...Specially since they were observed. Dum dum dum....
Review By [Eureka] • Date [1 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from eriktheviking
Review:
Another well written and entertaining story.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from RorschachsBlot
Review:
Nice touch with the last line.
Review By [RorschachsBlot] • Date [1 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from KrisB
Review:
I like this story. It's nice and simple. oddly, if a few things went differently, Xander could always bail out to the world without men. That actually sounds almost like he was secretly hoping for to start with.

Hmm, if they could get hundreds of kids from a single sperm sample though, it would be far better for him not to be having sex though... that'd be far too wasteful of an extremely valuable substance there. Well, they sent that one guy and his family there.

I liked the rescuing of alt-Willow and Alexander from Nazi world. I was also fond of the looting. I was very glad about the looting. ;)

On the boat options, I think that they should go for the yacht and atleast check out the navy ship. You are right a speed boat is more what they really need at the moment.

I think that they need to make a few more trips looting to get a few million a month in interest going. The yacht would be fine for going to plenty of those porn worlds. This entire venture is sort of like a vacation and relaxation to them. As the Anya's would say, money would make everything easier.

I can't really wait though because traveling Xander and his girls are going to be moving to the beach house while Buffy and her group will be following around and watching the Willow/Alexander couple court. You could have lots of fun there.

Xander needs to ask Anya if she could look into and do anything to minimize his family curses. The Anyas and Faith would agree that their man needs to be purified/uncursed just incase they ever actually all marry him or something. That could actually explain why his mom is so accepting of everything. This is all perfectly normal to her side of the family.

You've not brought up the box with giant scorpion spiders again. I'm actually wondering if the box was used to breed them or just store them. I was thinking the box would make a good place for his lab. It would need cleaning out first. I than thought it would be good for looting. The box is likely small and easily haulable. There is no telling how large that box is, but they could likely store lots of crap in it.

Hmm, find an empty world with the girls and have the Anyas cast some spell that would fling all the dangerous critters in the box outside. O.k. they'd need a warded area, maybe on top of high building or something and launching most of the critters off it. You know the goal would be to empty the box safely and than jump back home. They could always unleash them in Nazi world.

It would actually be neat if they some how managed to give Xander some James Bond talents. The Anyas might think that it would be a useful idea. It would be an easy method of training up Xander. Nah, Xander might trust it to try warding an area or something, but he wouldn't want to risk trying for a powerup.

Xander does need to go the computer route for abit. If he can get TV channels, he should manage to figure out how to hack into alt-internets. He'd be able to download all sorts of interesting toy plans than.

He needs to travel to a world with really good tech healing or auto med bays and age extension tech. Those are two items that his girls would both agree would make the awesome list immortality without your friends/family would be hell. They need healing services, but getting that automated in a tech medical bay would make him far more comfortable.

Next idea is that they should work slowly work on pieces for power armor. They could cheat and use magic to quickly change into and hide it in a pocket space when not used. The big part is that Anya and Xander could use some form of weapons just in case.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [31 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from Selias
Review:
I didn't even think about how Alt!Xander and Alt!Willow could be taken.
Review By [Selias] • Date [31 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from IronOx
Review:
Enjoying this, thank you. Liking the treatment of Mayor Wilkins a lot - very interesting, looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Review By [IronOx] • Date [31 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [31 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from sajuuk
Review:
hello lol
can you go to the empty world and have xander steal all research in the world from compagnies and states
also can he found some museum and take some arts to sold
ahave xander go to some Advanced world for IA, PC, armor, weapons, ships and with not tech from games or films like halo, starcraft, crysis, section 8, iron man, gundam...
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sajuuk
ps : please write some HOT lemon
Review By [sajuuk] • Date [31 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from LFW
Review:
This is a great fic
How is the Mayor dealing with Faith dating Xander and the Anya's?
I do hope that there is more of the Mayor in this fic; I always did like him
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [31 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from CageFire
Review:
Awesome new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [31 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Robby
Review:
Well, this is funny.

Looking forward to more.
Review By [Robby] • Date [29 May 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from docfeng
Review:
need more please
Review By [docfeng] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from FinalGuardian
Review:
I like it, stories like this are refreshing.
Review By [FinalGuardian] • Date [4 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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