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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leb
Review:
this is interesting, I hope you continue it
Review By [leb] • Date [20 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bigfan
Review:
Interesting start. Nimrod was a machine, highly advanced and capable of small amounts of emotion, but still a machine. I look forward to seeing how you work this story now that Xander's consciousness will be in control of the machine with powers like Nimrod. Great job! I hope we get another update soon.
Review By [Bigfan] • Date [17 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Balder
Review:
I hope you continue this.
Review By [Balder] • Date [12 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NewWorldRulez
Review:
Started off on a good note, looking forward to how the buffyverse will change in response to xander's new body and abilities
Review By [NewWorldRulez] • Date [12 Feb 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Stonewolff
Review:
This is very inteesting premise and one I personally never came across on any site. Please continue with this, I am very interested, where are you going to take it.
Review By [Stonewolff] • Date [2 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Blackfang
Review:
great idea. was hoping for a good young justice crossover but it's always buffy or williow as the stars
Review By [Blackfang] • Date [26 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Orical
Review:
very good start so far looking forward to reading more
Review By [Orical] • Date [24 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting start. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MadHobbit
Review:
one small question,should the y be 1997 not 2009? also very good start
Comments from author:
Normally, it would be, but since YJ starts in July 2010, I've moved up the timeline to 2009. This gives me some time to wrap up the BtVS side of things enough so it's plausible for Xander to leave without going against his character. Thanks for the review!
Review By [MadHobbit] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rod
Review:
Strong writing and an interesting premise, what's not to like? I look forward to seeing how this story develops.
Review By [Rod] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RHatch
Review:
I hope you update this
Review By [RHatch] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from stardrow
Review:
so...how would nimrod stack against amazo?
Comments from author:
In all honesty, I don't know. They both have their pros and cons, and a lot of them depend on the time, place, prior experience, and a whole mess of other variables. For example, the YJ Amazo is pretty underpowered compared to his other incarnations, since he hasn't observed the majority of the league. At the same time, Xanrod hasn't had a chance to adapt to his new form - he's all technical knowledge with no experience or wisdom. So, it will really depend on the situation.
Hmm, you've definitely given me some things to think about. Thank you for the review.
Review By [stardrow] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from prehensileclaw
Review:
This shows much promise. I particularly like the way you used the memory sequence to rush through the Halloween night itself without making it feel rushed.
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin
Review:
A very good start. I have marked this as a story to follow and look forward to reading more
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cyberwere
Review:
I don't usually comment on a first chapter, but I felt this warranted it. A nicely developed premise, and based on the category you put this in, I'm really looking forward to how Xander/Nimrod handles the meta-humans in DC. For all intents and purposes, they are mutants, so it should be...interesting to see how he deals with them.

I'm also looking forward to how you have him deal with the fact that he's a machine now. I think he and Red Tornado may wind up having some very interesting conversations. I should mention that I'm really only familiar with the Young Justice cartoon.

All in all, a great start that I'm looking forward to seeing more of.
Review By [Cyberwere] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Not Rated
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