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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from DieselDriver
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Well darn! I was kinda thinking Buffy might have a new boyfriend. Maybe later... in the next story that you haven't written yet... :-0
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell's Garden" from DieselDriver
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Thinking up Buffy's offhand remarks must be really fun. I had a good laugh about her plans usually involving lots of property damage.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Deadland" from DieselDriver
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Why doesn't she use her telekinesis to lift herself?
Comments from author:
There are definite limitations on TK in this universe, not using it on organic objects for example except for very specific circumstances. Then why can't they use it on their clothes you ask? Because making an item TK neutral is very very difficult. They can do it with the Hook because of heavily researched protocols used in their manufacture. Notice that her long knife isn't TK neutral though.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Go For Mission" from DieselDriver
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I'm not sure but I think you have the meanings of the words "proscribed" and "prescribed" reversed. Proscribed means "prohibited" and in this chapter you used "prescribed" in a spot that sounded like it actually meant proscribed. "proscribed" was used in one of the earlier chapters or stories, I don't remember where. Meant to ask then and forgot to do so. I think I'm getting senile.

"Cybertronic has troubles with the Brotherhood due to its flaunting of the Prescriptions.

" Also, "flaunting" or "flouting"?

That's the sentence that has me confused. And "the Prescriptions", maybe you explained it earlier? I don't remember. Who "prescribed" or "proscribed" something and what was it?
Comments from author:
The Brotherhood prescribed certain standards of behavior in regards to exploration and technology.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down Below the Solar Hell" from DieselDriver
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Can't really say "in the Nick of time" but the wormthing (whatever) got the point anyway.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from BlueEyedBrigadier
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Hmm...amazing finale but I am really starting to wonder if the Dark Symmetry will really dig deep soon enough for something truly heinous that would give Tasha and Buffy actually serious difficulties in fighting and defeating. Their help has been massive but all the curb-stomping has to lead to either the baddies taking a level or two in EVIL or our intrepid heroines getting their powers ganked.
Comments from author:
Demnogonis is a wimp in comparison. Algeroth the Apostle of War, Ilian the Dark Mistress, and Muawijhe the Lord of Visions are still to be seen.
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [2 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Grovtech
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And yet another completed story! This was really good with all the banter and humor I love about your stuff.
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [2 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from slmncpm
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oh i really hate to see this end! but thank you so very much for it!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [2 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Dmitri
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Well, this was a nice conclusion to a very impressive tale!
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [2 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from AnFan
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Great ending! Loved the excitement.

Do you plan on a non battle oriented meeting between the groups? Could be interesting if you can come up with a good enough reason. Can't think of one off the top of my head right away, but it could be fun to get a break between major fights.

I love this series. Hope you have more planned. Even with the other work you're doing, you seem to have a good story telling ability. I am simply amazed at your productivity!

Thanks again for the very entertaining story!
Review By [AnFan] • Date [2 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from DianeCastle
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Wow, you're tearing through these stories! The second completion in what? Twelve hours? Well, nice work. Buffy was great with the quippage.
Comments from author:
Third actually. This, the Barsoom one and Elvis vs Relic.


EDIT: Also for me Buffy dialogue always seems to write itself. I never really have to think about it.
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [2 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hot Stuff" from Grovtech
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Big, big Kada-boom! Ah yes, Buffy's book of taking down evil overlords do and don'ts. :)
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [23 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hot Stuff" from Dmitri
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And the adventures of Buffy and Natasha continue! Thanks for the update!
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hot Stuff" from AnFan
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Ohhh, there's going to be an Earth shattering Kaboom soon! That should be exciting :)

Hope everyone has their crash helmets on. And maybe a flight vest... could get exciting.
Comments from author:
Now that TSRoAM stuff I was writing is done I can finish it.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell's Garden" from Dmitri
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So far this is a very interesting story. Please continue. :)
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Not Rated
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