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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from superfan
Review:
Wow, this is seamless! I wonder how many of those kids will keep it, & how much:)
Review By [superfan] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from HappyWonKinobi
Review:
Already it's absolutely excellent, just as I've come to expect from such a high-quality writer such as yourself! Can't wait for more chapters, especially since I really love the character of Rorshach! :)
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Difdi
Review:
> Deciding that discretion was the better part of valor she used a light disk to teleport back to the X-mansion

Yeah, Glory's gonna have REAL trouble finding her key in this universe...
Review By [Difdi] • Date [15 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from disregard
Review:
Awesome chapter I can't wait to see how you make Xander's character.
Review By [disregard] • Date [14 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Oh, dear, the Powers don't have the take-back option and things are rapidly becoming twisted.. and any efforts to stem it will probably run smack into a truly pint-size Logan. As a fanfic description for a BSG/Battletech crossover puts it:

"It is not wise to hunt a wolverine; if you're unlucky you just might catch it.."
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [14 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SamDragon
Review:
Getting Dawn back could be a problem. Good story.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [14 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Damn, this just keeps getting better! Cannot wait to see the ramifications of that teleport!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [14 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome work, love the ninjas
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Infinix
Review:
What is this? A twist? There's a twist. A twist in the story so soon? This is promising. Very very promising.

This gets an 8 and not a 9 or 10 only because I desire moar.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [13 Feb 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ChaosKitsune
Review:
If I understand this correctly this went from magical Rorshack with rune knowledge(for the shotgun) to master ninja kage Rorshack with sealing knowledge(for his explosive scatter-shot 1/2 senbon/needle launcher) and a lot of minions.

The Powers that Be have failed awesomely. It is implied that they are a force for good but they are more in favor of keeping the status quo, running a cold war and gathering resources. Now there is a free agent running around.

Strength and speed at chunin matches or surpasses a slayer at taijutsu. But flat out beats slayers with Genjutsu(Illusions) and Ninjutsu(Ninja Magic). Rorshack is a kage. I don't know how you're going to scale the power differences between levels.
I'd guess 1000 Genin = 100 chunin = 10 Jonin = 1 Kage. Going from that logic 1% leftover energy leaves him at chunin.

The usual reasons for YAHF are: the spell being broken instead of running its course, the unstable nature of the Chaos spell, Hellmouth interference, being a Sunnydale native, having been possessed before, the fact that Xander wanted to keep these powers. It all adds up to Xander keeping all of his Halloween powers.

Now you are throwing in chakra in which at least awoken Xander's magic and given it a chakra structure making him chunin level. Half a charge jonin. You know the powers that be wont want him at full power. If they push it down to genin level there is going to be some backlash. Like Xander coming back stronger. They will have only bought time.

If they scanned his chakra usage they might find interesting things. Taijutsu will show up as a strange transmutation. Genjutsu will show up illusions and enchantments. Ninjutsu will just be two parts evocation Lightning and Fire followed by some very weird magic.

What's on the ninja Rorschach skill list.
Taijutsu: at least Chunin: well versed in street combat, gymnastics, and boxing
Genjutsu: ?
Ninjutsu: ?
Kenjutsu: ?
Fuinjutsu: ?

What does literature, mathematics, political science, religious education, detective skills, and improvised weapon mastery translate to.

Guessing:
Skills: Hunter ninja skill-set: Torture and Interrogation, Sealing(Literature= Calligraphy, Mathematics= Sealing Formula, Religious Education= Ninja Occult Knowledge for mystical side of sealing). And that's just a tip of the iceberg.

Waiting for more!
Review By [ChaosKitsune] • Date [13 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Fantastic!

See also: Awesome!

I look forward to reading more. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [13 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from removedauthor
Review:
Awesome story so far I like how you made Xander's costume. I hope to read many more chapters to this story.
Review By [removedauthor] • Date [13 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from KrisB
Review:
I'm actually trying to figure out what ninja's have a small winged girl as their kage. I'm coming up with blanks at the moment.

I get that the kid was a wolverine. The blank ring escapes me at the moment. One nice side benefit though is when this is all over, you could have that wolverine go back to the X-mansion that now has Dawn.

I think with the actual Illyana, Dr. Strange, and some telepaths that they'd be able to return Dawn. Actually, the side effects on Dawn could be the most awesome and frightening when you think about it. If she get's her own limbo or tied to Illyana's with her keyness she should have no problem opening gates. Aimming will be awhole another story though. They might think that it would be safer not returning her though.

It would be fun if you tie her soul sword with Xander.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [13 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Shadowcade
Review:
You have a skill for slipping crossovers into each other near seamlessly.

Buffy, (duh)
X-Men
Naruto (or something else ninja related)
Is it The Watchmen? (I can't remember)

We have now...
Future Willow of alt Universe (so to speak)
Lets see, a past slayer.
The most vicious hero detective to ever exist
An army of ninja (insert costume here)
An X-woman...

Why do I get the feeling you aren't even remotely done with introductions. :)
Review By [Shadowcade] • Date [13 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Inquisitor
Review:
Always thought Dawn would make the perfect Magik for Halloween. As for Xander, i'd rather have him be the X-Man Nate Grey or Stryfe with Zero(Jessie) as his sidekick.
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [13 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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