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Review of chapter "Awakening" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
The tension is building nicely and I think it'll be rather interesting to see Buffy and Vamp-Xander's meeting.

Its odd isn't it that everyone remembers Vamp-Willow but not Vamp-Xander from 'The Wish'? I watched it last night and I've got to say Vamp-Xander was way scarier than Vamp-Willow.

I've had my own ideas for a Vamp-Buffy/Willow-SVU/Blood Bloods fic for some time now but apart from a few scenes I've not got a plot yet.

And another thing, I actually think this is better than 'I'm Listening'.

Looking forward to your next update.

D.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I'm trying to make Xander scarier than he is funny, not sure how well I'm succeeding. But thanks again for the review!! :-)

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Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [28 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Curiouser, and Curiouser" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Ok, there's a few things that really ought to be SOP at this point to the New Slayers/Watchers group. If anyone turns up dead by a vampire attack - stake the body. You can't really take any chances here. Why on Earth did they wait days to check the girls in the morgue? If they *had* been vamped, they'd be risen and gone by then.

I might recommend the book "Vampire$" by John Steakley, about a team of for-profit professional vampire hunters. Every hunter had their own stake carved upon joining the team. If they die in the fight, it was used to stake them, just to be sure. I recall another story on this site where an M.E., who was in the know, routinely inserted a small sliver of wood into the heart of any "suspicious" corpses. If any animated into vampires, they'd immediately self-dust themselves - a rather elegant solution.

And for any of their people, they *have* to be considering the possibility that they've been turned at this point under these kinds of circumstances. Like I said in earlier review - lock out their access codes and tell everyone to not invite them inside, as they might have been turned by this point.
Comments from author:
Actually, they waited hours, not days - but maybe I wasn't clear enough. My bad. It's only about a day into the story. I'll try to be more clear from now on. Thanks for the review. :-)

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Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Curiouser, and Curiouser" from AllenPitt
Review:
People probably mostly don't like the idea of Xander as a vampire. But I have to admit, in the Wish he & Willow made very good ones. People mostly only remember vampire Willow from that ep, but vampire Xander was pretty interesting. He'd be very dangerous, knows the council & slayers inside out etc. If he managed to turn a slayer or two, things could get very very bad.
Comments from author:
My thoughts exactly! Hope you're enjoying the story. Thanks for the review!! :-)

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Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Foreboding" from burmafrdnow
Review:
meh. Kind of slow; and X/B pairings are beyond boring. Only 2 slayers together; why? I know- you have to do it like Hollywood does and make no sense or have any logic at all.

oh and by the way- it would have taken a dozen or more vampires to take down two young slayers and they would have dusted most of them. No sign of any dust. meh again.

This is so sad- your story with Frasier was so good.
Comments from author:
Wow, razzed. I am ashamed. But, there were piles of dust at the scene....the two slayers did dust a few vamps before they were killed. Maybe you just skimmed it? Anyway, sorry you are not enjoying it. Apparently I'm better at comedy than drama. :(

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Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [22 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's Peril" from SSanchez
Review:
Good start. You write more, I'll read it. Deal?
Comments from author:
Sounds like a plan. Thanks for the review! :-)
Review By [SSanchez] • Date [13 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's Peril" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Oh, dear. Here comes S3.09 "The Wish" all over again. I can only hope they aren't so stupid as to invite him inside once he shows up again and realize what the failure of the locator spell plus his suddenly turning up again a few days later means. The biggest problem here is that he has a LOT of inside information on the slayers' network and support structure. The *smart* thing to do is to immediately lock out every one of his access codes anywhere and alert all slayers and watchers to be aware that he might be a vampire the next time they see him.
Comments from author:
No doubt! Hope you enjoy my latest. Thanks for the review!! :-)

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Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [12 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's Peril" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
xan as a vamp...that could be very bad. keep up the good work
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. :-)

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Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [12 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Foreboding" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
an interesting start
Comments from author:
Thanks! Working on chapter 2 now. :-)

~Star
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Not Rated
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