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Review of chapter "Sins, Not Tragedies" from dreameralways
Review:
Really! They're going to make their own Buffybot. After how much Buffy disliked the thing? Well, I guess grief makes you do crazy things. I would love a sequel that maybe included some of our Almost Human characters. This was fun.
Comments from author:
Really and truly. Of course Dawn isn't creating it to have sex with so it won't be nearly as obscene as the previous Bot. The sequel could hold introductions between characters or it could just be Dawn bringing the Bot online for the first time. I'm still up in the air about it. :) Thank you for reading!
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [11 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sins, Not Tragedies" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Sad, but kind of sweet. I disagree that nothing happened. Life happened. Then again, I wouldn't mind seeing the story continue. I like that show and there are so many quirky characters. I'd love to see Dawn interact with some of them. That Dawn has Spike as a friend means there's someone in her life with the potential to help her deal with the fact that she'll out live most of the people in her life. It would be interesting to see them interact as well.

Thanks for writing something in this universe.

Blue
Comments from author:
I was aiming for sad, but tried to end it on a hopeful note. I can see where some might think nothing happened when compared to an episode of BtVS or Almost Human, but I think this established the series in which this short takes place (which was the intention). I fully intend to expand on the concept and think Dawn would have fun interacting with some of the characters in Almost Human. I think Spike would watch over Dawn for as long as he lives because he made a promise. :)

Thank you for reading and taking the time to review!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [3 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sins, Not Tragedies" from Thedruid
Review:
Um, ok.

Nothing really happened here. And it's the end?
Comments from author:
I suppose this wasn't the best plot bunny to use for a 1000 word challenge, but it was the only one I currently wanted to work on. Ah well. If it's any consolation I do intend to expand on this concept.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [3 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sins, Not Tragedies" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Sequel, please? I'd love to see what sort of Buffybot Dawn can create, with Willow's assistance, and how said 'bot might interact with our favorite DRN. :)
Comments from author:
I intend to add more, but this was written for the picfor1000 challenge so I was limited on words. :) I think they could create a pretty interesting one and I think Dawn would find Dorian just as fascinating. Thank you for reading!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [3 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sins, Not Tragedies" from Lurkerabove
Review:
Ooh, this bit has potential! I could see an expansion of this, with vignettes to explain transitions and the past, and a nice who-dun-it to involve the main characters of the shows.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I do intend to expand on it, but since Dawn is into illicit activities we not need the who-dun-it. :) Thank you for reading!
Review By [Lurkerabove] • Date [3 Mar 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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