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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from gaulty
Review:
good chapter, wonders how xander will adapt, keep up the good work, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [5 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from michaelangelo
Review:
Wraith CAN eat food without any trouble, they actually do it for pleasure since they get no nourishment from it, Until they hit puberty naturally born Wraith look and act 100% human, hive cloned ones are born as full adult Wraith. Before they discovered humans Wraith fed off other creatures, as it happens they just prefer humans, I think it has to do with their ability to drain the mind as well as the body.

Wraith can also disguise themselves to look human as in the episode 'Vegas' I think it has to do with their ability to alter genes since it's how they create their tech, for example they inject a small creature and wait a while as it turns into a gun/spaceship or whatever.

Wraith can last a very long time without feeding, Todd when captured lasted years but eventually went nuts, the Punk Wraith from the episode 'Vegas' was dying of radiation poisoning so had to feed often, 8 times in 3 months.


EDIT: Her name was Ella, the episode was called 'Instinct', in it they find out when born naturaly Wraith are more human than Iratis bug and eat food, when they hit puberty they start to evolve into Wraith.
Comments from author:
First thanks for your review.

'before they reach puberty naturally born wraith look and act 100% human.' I'd like to know where you got that from. As that was never said in the show. As for Wraith feeding on animals before they found humans, that's wrong. I can't say why because that would be a big spoiler for the Legacy Books, but it is very wrong, trust me.

As for the 'Vagas Wraith' thing. Bare in mind that Xander is on Earth on his own with no access to Wraith tech. I'm sure that Wraith can alter DNA but that's tech not a natural ability. So Xander wouldn't be able to do this.

As for the feeding, Xander will not know that, and he's only fed once so far.

Finally everything I've written is based on things mentioned in the Legacy Books, and therefore 100% canon. The books go into great detail about the Wraith physiology, society and history. It even features a Wraith child that does look like a miniature Wraith.

Hope that helps.

XG
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [5 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from TAO
Review:
Okay...someone else mentioned the possibility of Xander feeding off things other than human. Not sure if it would work on vamps (since they technically are already dead), but the other demons are "living" beings.

Also...what are the chances of Xander realizing that he can also transfer life force to other people like the Wraith are capable of doing? Don't get me wrong, I don't see him doing that regularly, but I could imagine him using that ability sparingly or perhaps even having difficulty doing that...but it would help keeping someone near death from kicking the bucket long enough for them to get real medical attention.

Oh...and by the way...just a word of warning. Agnar the Troll is out and about, so expect him to whine, bitch, moan, and downgrade your fic which he apparently is doing to just about everyone else lately.
Review By [TAO] • Date [4 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Riniko
Review:
Hoping that Xander gets his real memories back at some point and that the PTB get something they really need but never wanted. Now Xander may need to feed on the life force of other now to survive, but why would this have to be human. I am sure that there are many demons that would do just as well, especially those that also feed of humans. Would be karma if the vamps had someone hunting them for food.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [4 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from winniepoo
Review:
This is brilliant, I love what you're doing and I can't wait to read more.
Review By [winniepoo] • Date [4 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sosaith
Review:
Interesting. I hope you will continue this.
Review By [sosaith] • Date [4 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tosca
Review:
Interesting premise and very enjoyable start! Looking forward to reading more. :-)
Review By [tosca] • Date [4 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LanceAvalon
Review:
Considering Xander HAS to eat people to stay alive I don't see this going anywhere besides straight to hell. If he'd been made a half breed that would be something, but any attempt at getting Wraith to not eat humans is going to have every other Wraith trying to kill him as well.
Comments from author:
Don't worry I have a plan to overcome this. It hinges on Todd and the events that happen in the Legacy books. It become clear in time. Bare in mind the Powers That Be are manipulative and demons lie.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [LanceAvalon] • Date [4 Mar 14] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Calen
Review:
Not bad so far. Don't like Whistler after this hopefully Xander will get a chance to drain him dry. Heh. On that what would happen if a wraith sucked on a demon.
Review By [Calen] • Date [4 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Zerris
Review:
Amusing little idea. However you used the wrong bit for Quotes. One does not use ' for surrounding speech. You use " instead.
Comments from author:
thanks for the review, glad you like it.
Actually you can use both " and ' for speech. ' is commonly used in Britain, which is where I'm from.
Hope that helps to clear that up.

XG
Review By [Zerris] • Date [4 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from thundernaruto
Review:
Great chapter Update soon
Review By [thundernaruto] • Date [3 Mar 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from danny
Review:
Please continue the story it is definitely worth it although I'm not a big fan of having him always be like that.
Review By [danny] • Date [3 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from danny
Review:
Please continue the story it is definitely worth it although I'm not a big fan of having him always be like that.
Review By [danny] • Date [3 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fablesrogue
Review:
You're onto something here. Please continue.

*triple choc chip cookie?*
Review By [Fablesrogue] • Date [3 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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