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Review of chapter "Somewhere There's Danger" from BelleMorte
Review:
Loved Spike's reaction, can't wait to read what you come up with for the events leading to Buffy meeting Ace and the doctor. Love the chapter.
Comments from author:
I wanted an encounter using him and Nitro-9, but I needed him to stick around, so I couldn't quite justify actually killing him. (Besides, I like him as a villain better than a hero)

Thank you for the review.
Review By [BelleMorte] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Somewhere There's Danger" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Looking interesting - I'd like to see more.


later - English characters look fine so far.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Would you mind letting me know if I slip on dialogue for the British characters? Most of my exposure comes from reading British authors and watching BBC imports.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "People of Smoke" from Callista
Review:
Interesting start, I look forward to reading more. Thank you for writing!
Comments from author:
Thank you. It's been an interesting project, especially with the time travel aspect.
Review By [Callista] • Date [7 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "People of Smoke" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Those first couple paras are one of the BEST hooks I have encountered!

And the rest of the chapter was a very skillful 'set' of said hook.
Comments from author:
Thank you. The opening was partly inspired by the YAHF threads in the forums. I mean, what else could you expect when a fixed point (Order) is triggered by a Chaos event? I figure that's why there's all the anachronisms like movie characters and video games that didn't exist in 1997.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [5 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "People of Smoke" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Looks like you've set the stage for a tangled temporal web that I'll be VERY interested to see the results of...
Comments from author:
I don't know how tangled it'll actually end up, but time travel does make things interesting, doesn't it?
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [5 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "People of Smoke" from Metamorphmagus
Review:
Interesting start point, flows nicely into the story. Nice to see a Buffy focused halloween fic.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I get bored seeing the scenes at the school and Ethan's when the divergent bit doesn't take place until after those scenes.

Parts of it are actually based on ideas I had while reading some of the Halloween threads in the forums.
Review By [Metamorphmagus] • Date [5 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "People of Smoke" from bookworm
Review:
Oho, this promises to be fun... :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's been fun to write, too.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [5 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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