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Xander and his angels.

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ohaa Xander is known by Loki? I am not sure if I shall pity him now :)
Comments from author:
Having Loki know your name pretty much insures that you live in interesting times... :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [26 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ah such fun. Haven't read this series in a bit, so I reread this. And it's still good. Anyways, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that it's worth a reread and that you're still enjoying it.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [3 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Jiopaba
Review:
I feel like a story featuring a character with Echidna's powers could be something really awesome. There's an amazing tale to be told there, about how they change the world with their incredible ability to make fully powered clones of people. This is not that story.

It was good for a laugh, but I feel like it started getting extremely rushed as it went on. The last few chapters barely felt like they even had a coherent plot. Did you perhaps just get really tired of writing it after a while and bring it to a quick conclusion? The story was a lot of set up for a climax that involved two of the dozen or more clones Xander had made (Gear for the bombs, Superman's clone fought in open combat), and then finally and utterly collapsed into the realm of pure crack for the remaining bits.
Comments from author:
I think someone could take the story in a lot of different ways. You could do the epic combat at the end, you could play the comic book hero, the idiot that takes a dozen or two against a World... or you can blow the other guy's world up with their version of Kryptonite.

The plot was Xander preparing for the battle, he didn't have all the information so he wandered a bit, dealt with things that he saw as a problem. The story ended because they dealt with the problem and they went home. I could have dragged the story out into some epic idiotic battle but at the end of the day it's idiotic... the heroes can't be everywhere... a whole planet of evil guys... with ships or boom tubes they drop hundreds of thousands of troops on Earth... and it doesn't matter if the heroes win the battle eventually the Earth is done. They ended the problem the only way they could an anti-climatic explosion. So no I didn't get bored and rush the ending. If I had gotten bored with it, I wouldn't have started a sequel.
Review By [Jiopaba] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
I just fell out laughing at the end, but have to say that I really loved this story from the beginning to the end. It just kept getting kickier and zanier as it went along. And, that they took out the real bad guys made my heart happy.

Very nice! Thank you :)
Comments from author:
It was a fun story. Getting rid of most of the really crazy people in Arkham made sense to me. Same thing with Darkseid's group.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bobboky
Review:
good work
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Bah, ended much too quickly!
Comments from author:
There will be more Xander adventures.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
A fitting end for that planet, tho I like the irony of opening up Hellmouths on them.
Comments from author:
I was thinking about a ground war (or flying war) against Darkseid's people... and realized that without comic book logic and the hero must win trope... the Earth wouldn't win there. Superman, Supergirl (on a good day), Wonderwoman... and a bare handful of others can stand up to Darkseid. The only real solution is to nuke them with radion bombs... :)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
A little wacky, and somewhat zany. I loved it! So, is there gonna be a sequel? Cause you kinda setup for one.
Comments from author:
Yep, there will be a sequel.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from JediKnight
Review:
Epilogue was a bit confusing at the end and I was hopingthe story would be longer.
Comments from author:
Ah, hopefully the sequel helps with that.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Skysaber
Review:
Cool. A surprise ending, but a very fun one.

Looking forward to what we'll see from you next.
Comments from author:
Thanks, hopefully what comes next is interesting.
Review By [Skysaber] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
nononononononononononnononono. no, you can't The End.

You work for Bioware and were on the Mass Effect 3 project....ADMIT IT! (crosses arms and stamps feet childishly)
at least say there will be a sequel. ppppppplease (puppy dog eyes like Roger Rabbit)
say it....say IT! Or the rabbit gets dipped. (sorry, too much coffee and watching Who Framed RR with my goddaughter)

but keep up your good work
Comments from author:
I loved that movie.

Nah, I don't work for the Mass Effect 3 Project... but I know a lot of people were sad. :)

There will be a sequel, I'm just straightening some details out for the project. So no, you don't get to dip the rabbit.
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from deathgeonous
Review:
Huh, that's new. Well, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Comments from author:
It was fun.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from misterq
Review:
Looking forward to the sequel. Also, didn't Xander knock up Red and Elizabeth with baby girls? I wonder how that plot point developed?
Comments from author:
You'll see in the sequel. :)
Review By [misterq] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from LFW
Review:
I think that this is a bit confusing but fun ending and I am really getting the feeling that Xander might not be back in the correct universe
Hope that there is another story
Thanks
Comments from author:
There will be another story as for him being in the correct universe or not... well Buffy answered his phone call... :) That still leaves a lot of possibilities though.
Review By [LFW] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice work
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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