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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from sdavidm
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Interesting start. A dragon ball/SG1 cross will make for some interesting reading. I can't help but think you've made them a little too powerful though, but hopefully you have some real challenges in store.
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [27 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from Raider
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wow...ok...sold. more of this please?
Review By [Raider] • Date [5 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from Morgomir
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Great story so far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from aguy
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Pretty baddass. I'm liking the story so far, and the meeting with SG1 was done really well. Describing Dawn as looking so young is a bit unecessary though, especially if she's having sexual thoughts. The spell/fusing with her sayan could easily have aged her a couple years so it isn't quite so creepy.
Review By [aguy] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from Gideon
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Well Xander and friends don't seem to see Apophis as much of a challenge. I wonder how the balance of power would be in the story if the Saiyans were only able to punch through a shield by working together or if it drained more of their energy and left them tired? That would have meant the Gouald retained some level of threat. As it is they can laugh at anything the Gouald can send against them. I hope that doesn't remove some of the drama from the story. Maybe they will be more vulnerable to magic than to science based weapons.
I hope that Xander wins the bet because I think he seems to be the one with the most restraint at present and I would hate to see what an 11 year old Dawn would come up with.
Nice end to the chapter too, Dawn embracing her otherness and inhuman nature. Now would be a good time for Daniel to try for a diplomatic solution. Might be tough with how warlike the Saiyans are though!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from Bluesnowman
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love it
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from darkk
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thanks for the update,,, just don't let the story die after the wedding plz
Review By [darkk] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from (Current Donor)Tanaxanth
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Congrats on the wedding and condolences to your bank account.
great chapter and I'm so hoping Xander wins because Jenny and dawn jus on leashes...
Review By [(Current Donor)Tanaxanth] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from EroSlackerMicha
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wahahhahahahahahahahaahhaahaaahahaahahahahahahahaahahaa

well the Gould are parasites. yeah, earth has nothing to stop them. piss them off yes. poor Jen, she's going to get cornered by Sam later.
and I pity the Asgard if they try to do something. little grey dudes will be paste before they blink.
keep it up
and really wondering if the bet ends up as a three way tie then who gets what
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from Dragonwolftiger
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Very nice chapter on a very nice story. I've read other saiyan stories and this one is quite well done. As for your end note - just remember you're not losing a daughter - you're gaining one.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from DarthTenebrus
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Blood, guts and glory...just your usual day on the job for a trio of Saiyan warriors.

And it's not even lunchtime...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [1 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from KingOfCretins
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Good Chapter

The battle went as expected though I'm surprised they didn't cripple both ships. It should be interesting to see more reactions to the Trio and their abilities even more so when they make Dragonball connection, it may not be as well known as Superman for instance but it is well known enough that it shouldn't take too long for someone to figure it out.

As for the Super Saiyan thing to be honest it would be very cool to see but I can't imagine a circumstance where it could occur and it's really not needed against the enemies they are facing.

Out of curiosity will you be continuing Legend to be Feared or has it been side-lined for now?
Hope you continue both as they great stories with lots of potential.

Can't wait for more so please write more when you can.
Review By [KingOfCretins] • Date [1 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from CageFire
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Great new chapter. Keep up the awesome work. :) I do wonder if/when they'll find out about the sarcophagus and if they'll be able to use it to save Buffy. Although like you said she's kinda superfluous for this story with 3 saiyans, but still.

Also congratulations... Well except for having to pay for everything. ;)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [1 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: - Pride Goeth... Part.2" from Harry
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Well, the System Lords are about to find out that if you thought SG1 was bad news, you ain't seen NOTHING yet! And I think that Jack and SG1 are going to be having some interesting things to report to General Hammond. Now, is it going to be Xander or Dawn that goes SS first?
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: - Pride Goeth... Part.1." from MaxPayne
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Absolutely loving this fic. Dawn seems to be more Saiya-jin like than Jenny and Xander. Something tells me that Xander is definitely gonna have his full with both Jenny and Dawn. Especially Dawn! I can't wait to see what happens when they interact with SG-1. Absolutely looking forward to the next chapter...
Review By [MaxPayne] • Date [14 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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