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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from Mcspender
Review:
Now that was awesome!. Those aliens got what they deserved, yees indeed!.
Dawww, poor Buffy :(. But well, the SAS thing is gonna be good for her, and why do I think that Henno and Buffy are gonna be very friendly, very soon ;)??.

Cool fic, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Henno, although he's a good guy and a great soldier he's not the sort of guy I'd recommend as Buffy's love interest...he'd end up breaking her heart...again.

There's about four stories left in this season of Grim Up North. I've got one last season in the pipe line them I'm cancelling it. GUN3 will be it. But...I want to end it on a 'happy ever after' note' where you can imagine the characters living out their lives (and that includes Buffy) in reasonable happiness.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [4 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Oh, and by the way, the quote Marcus was referencing below originated in the 1988 film "They Live" by John Carpenter. It was: "I have come here to chew bubblegum and kick ass. And I'm all out of bubblegum."

It was a purely ad-libbed line from "Rowdy" Roddy Piper, but ended up becoming a well-known quote. Go figure.
Comments from author:
Now, I'll have to google 'They Live' to see if its the film I think it is!

Cheers,
D.

PS: I've just looked and it was the film I thought it was (although my memory tells me I saw it ten years before it was made!), this is extra good because I've been trying to remember the title of this film for ages...I feel an xover coming on!
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [4 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Alas, sometimes it's not about you and the most unselfish thing you can do is to step back and let someone else be happy.

And it looks like the SAS thing could segue into a whole new story arc - and I suspect they'll not be quite the pushovers she's expecting...though I also suspect they might be a bit surprised at her in turn.

Her best bet at the moment is to take Willow up on her offer and "go gay" again.
Comments from author:
Yep the SAS will turn up again in a couple of stories and remember they have their own slayer in the form of Maggie.

'Go gay', yep that's a possibility as I think I've found the perfect girlfriend for her.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [4 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from djhardim
Review:
Good

“Pleeez!” Buffy shook her head pityingly as she headed back to her office; she'd go on one of these exercises; she'd show these SAS guys what a slayer was capable of and then they'd leave her alone. Having kicked the Initiative’s butt she didn't really didn't see why she couldn't do the same to these SAS guys.

I have a feeling that Buffy is in for a VERY big surprise.
Comments from author:
Yep, look out for 'Unnatural Selection' in a few stories time.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [4 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from MarcusRowland
Review:
It's time to kick ass and chew bubble gum... and I'm all outta gum.

later - Quote is from Duke Nukem
Comments from author:
Can't remember where that quote comes from, have to google it.

Yep, Buffy and Henno, the evil-space-frogs don't really stand a chance!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [4 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
Review:
You know what time is it? It's Pay back time xD!!!. Let's kick those foul Aliens butts!!! xD!!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Who Dares Wins!

Slayers and the SAS, an unbeatable combination.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [4 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Mcspender
Review:
I think it's time to revisit the moon and colonize it; maybe using a loot of explosives to clear some obstacles. I mean, there's not intelligent life there, right ;)??.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Oh, don't you worry about the moon!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [2 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
So, it's the Selenites that are ultimately behind this! I do wonder if they've eaten Cavor yet.
Comments from author:
One can only hope...glad to see someones following the plot!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [2 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Mcspender
Review:
Poor Adam :(. At least Buffy took out those monsters, and once again the cops were over their heads this time.
It's time to let the pros take care of this siege.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
To be honest I don't think the police should be allowed guns, they're dangerous (and not always to the bad guys). Shooting baddies should be left to the army!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [2 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Ouch! She really never can meet a nice man, can she? Well, not for long, it seems.
Comments from author:
Could you really imagine Buffy in a 'good' relationship? It'd drive her mad!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [1 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Mcspender
Review:
Ya know, I really think the Slayers should add to "the something's wrong manual" any time they're find themselves being unable to use their cell phones.
I mean, I hope the soldiers at least are using their radios.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Short range military stuff should be ok.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Oh, dear. The standard “make sacrifices to open the way for the eldritch abominations to come and eat the Earth” routine. Well, the standard “kill them a lot” approach should ultimately solve the issue, but they might want to try to stick to long range weaponry, if possible. How about those lasers that Buffy ordered?

Also, for inspiration (and because, if you’re a *true* HPL fan, these are, in fact, mandatory):

To Read (free, online):
The Dreams in the Witch House: http://www.dagonbytes.com/thelibrary/lovecraft/dreamswitchhouse.htm
The Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath: http://www.dagonbytes.com/thelibrary/lovecraft/thedreamquestofunknownkadath.htm
The Whisperer in Darkness: http://www.dagonbytes.com/thelibrary/lovecraft/thewhispererindarkness.htm

To Watch:
The Dreams in the Witch House: $1.99 USD to own on Amazon Instant Video
The Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath: $2.99 USD to rent on Amazon Instant Video
The Whisperer in Darkness: $2.99 USD to rent on Amazon Instant Video

There you go, plenty of inspiration for your next HPL story! :-)
Comments from author:
Never a great fan of HPL, I used to play the CoC RPG. As a lot of the pictures of monsters on BtVS came straight from the CoC books I thought they would be easy to fit into the BtVS background.

Slightly more than the opening a portal, the portal is already open and the abominations are all ready here!

Looking at a lot of the monsters in the CoC RPG book, apart from the very powerful ones, I found most could be taken down with a sawn off shotgun!

Thanks for sending those links, I'll give them a look over the w/e.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [28 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from Mcspender
Review:
Holy frack. This Jaffs guys are really something :S. Buffy and her team are gonna need some very serious firepower to solve this mess.
And that's a very cruel weapon the one the xenos have :S.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Yep, thought I'd do a baddie with no redeeming features just for a change.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Well, waiting for the next chapter. But I still say you should write something with Nyarly in it. :-)

I confess I wonder what Willow would think if she met Keziah Mason.

EDIT: Nyarlathotep - a malicious and mischievous Outer God from HPL. He and Keziah Mason star in "The Dreams in the Witch House" and he figures prominently in "The Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath." The Dreams in the Witch House is a short story (available online for free) and you can watch a wonderful motion comic of The Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath on Amazon Instant Video for $2 at the moment, I believe. Check both of them out.
Comments from author:
Nyarly? Have to look that one up after I look up 'Keziah Mason'

We love Google, Google is out friend.

Cheers,
D.

PS: Had a look on Google and know know what you're talking about...perhaps something for Grim Up North 3?
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [28 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Xovervore
Review:
This is shaping up to be a spanking good tale. ;-)
Entry for the Slayer Handbook: Vampires - mostly harmful.
Comments from author:
Made me laugh.

I have a list of 'Slayer Helpful' hints somewhere, things like; 8. Those who fight monsters should make damn sure that they don't become monsters themselves and 14. Always keep a supply of press on nails handy.

Death and destruction to start tonight! Assuming I remember to update, I often forget!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [28 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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