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Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Beer is *the* constant of civilization and history.

Beer and wine were the safest things to drink, early on, and watered wine was basically saying water made safe by adding wine.

Given an Immortal's life, particularly Methos' life, beer was literally a staple and the imprint of this has never faded. It probably never will.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from RHatch
Review:
good update :)
Review By [RHatch] • Date [28 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from Oxnate
Review:
While I no longer think Methos was 'Death', I still liked the pun: Death tones. (I have a story that explains why I think differently if you're so inclined)

Now, can you go beyond that and explain why the continued existence of a mass murderer is NOT for everyone’s ears?” -- I'm wondering if you wrote that as intentionally ironic, as Methos has certainly killed far more people than Angelus ever could.

the only easy day was yesterday -- I'm sure that such a saying goes back far further than the SEALs. Methos should know the history of it, even if you have to make it up.

Anyway, despite what my review would otherwise tell you, I really liked this and hope for more.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [27 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from JasonBarnett
Review:
Is Methos someone to talk about mass murderers left alive?

edit: couldn't quite a few of them just be said to have a ton of cases of self defense?
Comments from author:
As he mostly grew out of it, I suppose he can. Though technically any Immortal with more than five heads is also a mass murderer (or a serial killer).
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Quiet in the Library." from Dragan
Review:
Wouldn't recommend Willy's Alibi Room, unless you want a Blood Lite.
Review By [Dragan] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good for moving character interactions forward but not enough plot in this chapter for me to have a comment on what's going on.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Quiet in the Library." from VillageOrchid
Review:
If Methos knew he was over the hellmouth - well I guess he hasn't spent much time studying evil thinking that it was something he was (instead of grieving and callous). I'm sure that the hellmouth energies contributed to Xander being so quick to want to kill him - but did they also contribute to Methos drawing his sword in the first part? I wonder.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from LFW
Review:
I am glad that there is more Jana and that you have made her a bigger character than she was in BtVS
I am interested in what may be controlling Giles
And I am interested in Xander and Willow growing as people and maybe pulling Buffy along too
Hoping for more from you
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from Oakheart
Review:
I like this story. You've got some good momentum going, and the characterizations
feel right. It doesn't hurt that these are two fandoms that fit together better than
many others. Do you envision Xander encouraging or dissuading Willow from cracking
a few databases for info on a certain Dr. Adam Pierson?

SD
Comments from author:
I see him keeping Willow away from Dr. Adam Pierson... which means she'll look, of course, because Willow does silly things like that.

Thanks.
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from Greywizard
Review:
Very nice handling of the various personalities involved. ;-)

Can't wait to see how things progress - or, more likely, deteriorate - in the next chapter. ;-)
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from AceDreamer
Review:
This is nicely done. A good handling of a collision between the philosophies and world views of the Scoobies and a couple of Immortals.

If a axe is what Xander's good at, would he be allowed to use this in The Game? It's a hand-to-hand weapon, after all. A good axeman can do nasty things with butt strokes, and, with a suitably reinforced shaft, use it to block blade blows. Armoured gloves would be a smart move - demon hide? I guess it would depend what sort of axe you'd want to use...

I'm interested to see where this story goes.
Comments from author:
It'll be a while before that becomes an issue, or at least if things go along as the muse and plot bunny decide it will.
Review By [AceDreamer] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from Franka
Review:
Can't wait what's going to happen next. Great story!
Review By [Franka] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from Rob
Review:
Good to see more of this.
Review By [Rob] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from kyro
Review:
would like more!!!
Review By [kyro] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3 - Living Dead Girl" from Elleria
Review:
Very happy to see an update, looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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