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Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from Robby
Review:
Awesome story so far, I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Review By [Robby] • Date [19 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from Bloodgutter
Review:
I am seriously Loving!!! this story please continue.
Review By [Bloodgutter] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Encore!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from Fayari
Review:
This is interesting! I wanna see where you bring this!
Review By [Fayari] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from NamelessDestruction
Review:
Deadgummit, Animeronin! You always know how to reel me in! It's going to be interesting seeing where this one goes. I eagarly await your next chapter.
Review By [NamelessDestruction] • Date [27 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from Neverwillmini
Review:
Like how your Jenny seems to have a bit more backbone & bite to her character and ssems to be willing to slap the girls and Giles down a bit when they're poking at Xander too agressively or disregarding him. Always love to see Methos in the mix; it will be interesting to see if he'll be more involved with Xander's actual training.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [27 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from Raider
Review:
the methos scene had me laughing fit to hold my ribs..well done sir.
Review By [Raider] • Date [27 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Good story. I have always liked the Highlander crossovers and Xander / Janna are characters that can be developed in so many directions. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [26 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from Bobboky
Review:
Very nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from djhardim
Review:
Recommended headware for the would be demon hunter - a padded helmet of some kind.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [26 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from djhardim
Review:
Looks good.

Hopefully, Xander can make it to adulthood before his first death.

Does Drusilla know that Jenny is an immortal and Xander is a preimmortal?

EDIT:

“I’ll be fine, Xander, so long as Buffy doesn’t throw anything else at my head.”

“I said I was sorry!” Buffy griped. “What more do you want?”

"Detention, Ms Summers, for a week."

I don't care what's going on, that kind of behavior shouldn't be tolerated.

Who knows, next they might do it to Snyder.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [26 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from LFW
Review:
Hello
Glad to read more of this
This is a good start and you put lots big teenage things in with the dancing and the Willow dating question . . . I am impressed with how they followed so closely and cleanly.
And I was impressed that you change things a bit by having new mummies appear
Looking forward to what you do next
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from Elleria
Review:
Love this story, very happy to see an update. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from (Current Donor)Truthmaker
Review:
I'm happy you chose to continue this story.

Making Xander a preimmie is almost a trope unto itself at this point, but the more the merrier.
Comments from author:
True, but of all of them he's the most fun to torment with the whole 'they are not your parents' schtick.
Review By [(Current Donor)Truthmaker] • Date [26 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 - Life's a Dance" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Plot and characterization are strong. Stylistically this needs a little more room to breathe with more descriptions, sense of visual and spacial, and perhaps reactions. At some points it seems like the cliff-notes or an outline. Perhaps more connecting from point to point in the plot?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jun 14] • Not Rated
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