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Xander's mental journey.

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Review of chapter "The Follow-Up: Epilogue" from raxadian
Review:
And now I am thinking in Buffy dressed as the Queen of Hearts carrying a giant Axe and yelling, "Off with her head!"
Comments from author:
:)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Follow-Up: Epilogue" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Yes, Buffy being PERKY after finding out she's bones and earth? And it's Willow's fault? She should still be angry.

You realize you just wrote yourself into another chapter, right?
Comments from author:
We'll see.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Follow-Up: Epilogue" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Follow-Up: Dawn part 2" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Buffy reminds me of Kikyo in "Inuyasha" She was a construct of bones, earth, herbs, and necrourgy.
Comments from author:
I know; "Inuyasha" is one of my favorite anime.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Follow-Up: Dawn part 2" from aeraveil
Review:
Ah, so this Buffy is more of a golem than anything else? Not surprising, given Willow's Jewish background.
Comments from author:
Basically - yes. Thanks for the comment.
Review By [aeraveil] • Date [17 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Follow-Up: Dawn part 2" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Follow-Up: Dawn part 2" from raxadian
Review:
Okay, I think Dawn will kill the snake for hurting her sister.
Comments from author:
You just wait, the story isn't yet done!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [17 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Follow-Up: Dawn" from raxadian
Review:
You should change the tittle from "Xander's mental journey" to something else if you plan to add more chapters focusing on others. How about Faith next? I think the animal that fits her best is a dog. Not because she is a b*tch but because she needs family and friends.
Comments from author:
I'll think about this. Thank you for the reviews!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [17 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's mental journey." from raxadian
Review:
Well Xander, at least your luck does keep you alive.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [17 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Follow-Up: Dawn" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's mental journey." from Hoplite
Review:
Interesting story where Xander meets some of his past incarnations. I have to admit, like the previous reviewer, I didn't really get the ending or the fact that he had become different. It felt a bit cryptic.

Also, there was one notable exception: Vamp Xander. Although I suppose. He was not really part of THIS dimension.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. And yes, Vamp Xander was never a big part of the show, unlike Vamp Willow.
Review By [Hoplite] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's mental journey." from RedCalypso
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I'm afraid I miss the point of the ending...

Edit: So why did Xander scream? Because his appearance had changed?
Comments from author:
The remnants of curse were cast out of Xander and sent back to Sunnydale from where it came initially.
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's mental journey." from Bobboky
Review:
Nice work
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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