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Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from ZeakaGirl
Review:
Gained a sword but lost a Slurpee machine not sure if that's a good trade.
Review By [ZeakaGirl] • Date [5 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from draconis
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Quite a bit of fun and a very enjoyable read. Reminded me of Douglas Adams but with more "local" relevance.

A fascinating foray into the meaning and execution of justice, self-awareness, and self-control.

When you say that at the end of the 500 years he'll be inserted back into his timeline at the original time of the event, it suggests he'll be mortal again and live with his friends in a demon-free world he paid for with his "sentence". I like that.
Review By [draconis] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from LFW
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Is the sword still as cool when you accidentally exchange your slushy machine for it?
Great bit and the Queens breasts were mentioned again, thanks
Looking forward to more
Review By [LFW] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from JediKnight
Review:
?Nice work on the update, hoping for more when you can. Is based on New 52's "Justice League"?
Comments from author:
Nope, random JL that I thought up.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from warslick
Review:
Another great chapter of this story even if it was a bit shorter than usual. I do hope that you continue to write more of this story as its a different take on the all powerful Xander archetype.
Review By [warslick] • Date [4 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from SamDragon
Review:
Sneaky snatch, distract Xander with the sword long enough to keep the Slurpee machine.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from Selias
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I'm betting that sword in the stone will be important, later on.
Review By [Selias] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from Morgomir
Review:
Great if slightly strange story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from Bobboky
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Nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from AlphaBeta
Review:
"Cool, got a free sword," Xander said, sticking it into a nearby boulder.

"He kept the Slurpee machine," Hippolyta said with a frown.

LOL! The things they worry about. Great chapter, need to be longer though. Please update again REAL soon!
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from (Recent Donor)Manchester
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Mxy's ahead on points that time, what with snaffling the icy-liquid-goodness machine. On the other hand, it'll keep the imp in a happy mood and inclined to grant Xander some more favorable pranks.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Manchester] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from eriktheviking
Review:
An entertaining short.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from VillageOrchid
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Fun chapter that leads for a quest for a new magical(?) slurpy machine.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from (Current Donor)Katrina
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Okay, that last bit, *laughing.* Now they have to find another one. :) Still enjoying this quite a bit and I'm looking forward to more. Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back of the Turtle: Flashback and Forth." from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Hah! Hmmm, will it proceed beyond contemplation? After all, it is Xander...
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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