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Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from Jarvey
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Just read the whole works... wish there was more!
Review By [Jarvey] • Date [18 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from Morgomir
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Funny story so far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from Eureka
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Just read all 7 chapters in one go...
Just let me say "OMG!! LOL"
Review By [Eureka] • Date [24 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from Muroshi
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Since he was thinking about making a portal home or perhaps to Kara's dimension (not sure which he was thinking about) he should totally turn his island into a vacation destination for his girls back in SunnyD. If his returning means that evil would get a boost then his leaving must have gotten a reduction which is easily shown by SG killing all the vamps including Angel and by Ethan joining the Scoobies and providing Willow competent training. Which means any time a hero needs a vacation they just take one on his island and evil can't take advantage of the weakening of good because of the requirement of balance. Plus he can now scry Willow right back and catch her scrying him lol. Then they could trade communication that way till he has the portal up. He could even make a similar portal to Kara's world and offer hero vacations where they come to another dimension to relax and can even meet up with heroes who Xander introduces them to who share similar interests (best for inventors so they have new ideas flowing back and forth).
Review By [Muroshi] • Date [23 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from HappyWonKinobi
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Definitely a good chapter! I enjoyed it and I look forward to the next chapter for the story! :)
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [22 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from jaeger
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As others have already noted, if the care package gors through, what will stop willow from following her love to this new horizon.

Like the story, thanks for sharing
Review By [jaeger] • Date [22 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Just Keeps Getting Better! OH man, humor is soooo underrated and sooo necessary. Thank you for this fic!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [21 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from Zaxxon
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Oooo.... sending a care package would be... so fascinating a concept that you should do it. What would go in it besides hand-lotion? How would Xander react? While Xander promised not to return, I don't think communicate is included. Which could be funny, if for "research material" Willow (or someone) sends Xander some more Marvel comic books.

And what's to say that the Scoobies can't take a vacation and visit Xander, once in a while.
Review By [Zaxxon] • Date [21 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from MadHobbit
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good story, i don't like the ones where he gets transformed and becomes a over powered powerhouse in the space of a few weeks,I prefer when he has to work for months developing his powers, like going from golden gloves to olympic gold medal in a few months,do wonder if he bites a woman would she become a man ?
Review By [MadHobbit] • Date [21 May 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from Bobboky
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Good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from raxadian
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This is fun and all, but it kind of lacks a decent super fight.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from KEmperor
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This one is really entertaining. Looking forward to more.
Review By [KEmperor] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from KrisB
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Well, if Fury was smart, he'd have his folks make contact via either the shop that sold his ocean treasure or the subway folks. The subway method would be more public so it would likely be a private thing.

Another thing is why send an agent directly to him? O.k. sure they've got lots of data on him, but they could send a few agents to interview Doc. Strange and the various folks from the subway. The SHIELD shrinks should basically say that he is testing out his powers in a positive way while also playing out child hood fantasies.

There are some minor things that you've mentioned that I'd like to see developed. The thing about a portal with some stone and crystals demands to be put in. I'd also like him to actually try his hand and designing his own defensive rune towers to build around the island. o.k. he'd make sure to have Doc Strange check things out and get a stamp of approval that everything on it looks fairly harmless and nothing should obviously go wrong... I just what him to build a series a very large crystal prism towers with runic inlays jutting out from around the island. Thinks something that looks like some neat crystal tower defense grid. It should be stylish, flashy, and very, very goofy.

Stephen has been a great straight man for Xander. I actually want Xander to try gathering stuff to play around with that alien tech that he may remember now. O.k. he might not be able to build tons, but something on Xander's take on Kyptonian tech. I still think that Xander needs to spend a few hours going around various universities and major libraries memorizing various books. O.k. he'd only really need to do that once, but it should help him over all. Marvel has a wildly different tech level than he should be used to.

I'd like to see Wolverine pick up fem Sabertooth and get bitten.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
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This is rather amusing. And I like Xander cleaning the subways and fixing roads. More supers should do this kind of thing.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Walking on Sunshine 7" from SamDragon
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Willow and Buffy seem to be spending a lot of time spying on Xander. Naughty girls. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [21 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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