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Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from blackholelord
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Funny the whole way.
Review By [blackholelord] • Date [22 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Dragonbaita
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BRAVO!!!!!
THIS STORY IS GOOOOOOOD!!
IT IS JUST WHAT I NEEDED TO GET OVER MY COUSIN DYING IT IS THAT HEART WARMINGLY FUN!!!
Review By [Dragonbaita] • Date [2 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Sandi
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And I'm picturing this spin off focusing on the base and all the LMDs living their lives. Avoiding conversation doesn't mean not talking, it means not talking unless it is important. Some of the advanced models must have some idea what's going on. The oil can says that.
Comments from author:
Every generation has advanced their AI.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [1 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from LordSia
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Love the LMD-operated base.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [27 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from grd
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Wonder when Xan will introduce him/herself to the marvelverse.
Review By [grd] • Date [26 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from JediKnight
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Very funny job on the new chapter.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [26 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Sniff, sugoi! So good! Thank you! As a measured response, the marooning of the Iizard is a great punishment! Hmm, will it improve his attitude if more lizards were moved to Hope's Shield Island?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [25 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Grovtech
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I can just see Xan's first run in with a serious I-want-to-hurt-you foe making fun of all the public utility work that he's done. Mind you they won't laugh long, but still given how the bad guys rejoice in being bad ... Look it's MS. Public Service or Captain Road Crew. :)
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [25 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from warslick
Review:
I do love this take on Xander becoming Kara. This definitely needs to keep being continued so we can all have fun with Xander's adventures.
Review By [warslick] • Date [25 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from CageFire
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Haha. Awesome new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [25 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from KrisB
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I don't think that I'd have put the lizardman in my island. I'd have likely dropped him off in the savage land. Xander might actually want guests or something in the future.

I like how this goes as Xander hobby of cleaning the various subway goes on and on. Xander is now known as Ben's friend. He/she is likely getting lots of positive word of mouth PR for the subway cleaning and road repair stuff.

It'll be funny when some one asks SHIELD for dirt on Xander.

Can't wait for the real agent to chat with Xander. It'll be funny. The agent will ask why he built his own island. Xander will reply that every single one the existing islands that he had scouted had some sort of active secret base. He just didn't want the hassle.

I can see Gambit and Scott both getting bitten within the week.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [25 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Really enjoying this. I really like how Xander is finding balance and fun... and that the castle just has plumbing and tv.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Nov 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from CrystalBlaze
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A pleasure to see your fun side, Falkun! And I don't know about Dogbertcarroll, but I consider that first omake canon!
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [25 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I liked that you added the twist that Xander in his human teen self either learned or always could to detect magical power levels, and that in his Kara body which is sensitive to damage by magic he still can.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Love this!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Nov 14] • Not Rated
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