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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from djhardim
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What we need is an intervention.

Stick Xander and Buffy in a room and lock the door. They only leave when they iron out their differences.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [30 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from FireWolfe
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sorry xan a jerk and always has been from season 3 on. He did not get the girl so he went after faith got his ass handed to him then went for cordy cheated on her then hit on Anya who killed more than angel spike and the scurge combned but condemned Buffy for dating Angel and Spike. Really? I love to hear his reasons for being pissed but so far no real sympathy for the guy sounds like he ran out again something he bitched at the others for doing. Then again if he did get kicked out there may have been a reason right or wrong he needs to man up and say ok lets work this out or stay the hell away from me. Either better then the whining.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [25 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Yeah, ok, yah set it up... Better get some meat on it soon...
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from slmncpm
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i like it and i am glad you are not cutting buffy any slack. *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from JasonBarnett
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how about explaining why Buffy should be cool with one of her best friends being so willing to throw his life away
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from djhardim
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Frankly, I don't think that Xander comes off very well in this chapter.

For whatever reason, Buffy made a judgment call to exclude Xander from this particular mission.

Xander's actions could very well have jeopardized that mission.

As it see it, Xander had two options: 1. Wait until Buffy and the others had returned from the mission before having it out with her, and deciding his next course of action; 2. While they were gone, write a note, pack his bags, and leave the note where they could find it.

Judging by what happened in the previous chapter, there was serious fallout as a result of his actions.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
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The fact that Buffy is paying Xander a visit now makes me think that Buffy has serious health problems.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
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I found this chapter to be a bit disjointed. Not a lot happens even though there is lots of dialog and it isn't clearly explained where this story separated from canon. A lot of questions are left unanswered so far - Why did Xander leave? Why did Buffy track him down? Why did Buffy lose track of Willow and Faith too? Why does Buffy seem to think they should be on good terms when they haven't spoken for years? The little girl seems a bit random too, I don't think there is enough of her in this scene to make much of her character but maybe in the next chapter or two.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)NotAGoauld
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I get the back and forth with Xander's actions. Very nice can't wait to read more.
Review By [(Recent Donor)NotAGoauld] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Skysaber
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It was a mistake to let her in the house. A mistake I hope he learns not to duplicate from this one disaster. It's a very simple rule. If you allow them entry into your house they have access to your secrets, and if you aren't comfortable letting them know things DON'T LET THEM IN!!!!

Seriously, that was such a noob mistake.

Second, arm yourself. Slayers are, by their very nature, dangerous supernatural predators, and this one has shown repeatedly, on several occasions, that she has no compunctions at all against using her powers to bully and use force to get her way with humans. But while guns don't work that well on vampires, they work fine on vampire slayers.

Third. Move. Little miss "I am in charge, because I'm the Slayer" has never yet listened to anyone who ever tried to stop her from doing anything she felt she wanted. So now that she's found you, go elsewhere. It'll save a ton of hassle, and since your only other option is to put her down like a mad dog, if you want her to leave you alone, it's just less legal headaches to move rather than explain why you buried land mines in your lawn and shot your blonde stalker seven times in the head.
Review By [Skysaber] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KrisB
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this one honestly has me confused. Xander seems like he wants to reconnect with Buffy, but he is also standing up to her so rather harshly. Buffy likely wants something. Xander knows this. I'm amazed at just how polite Xander actually was though.

I don't know if the girls is his, or if he rescued and is raising her, or a spawn from an ex-demon girl friend. Knowing Xander, she could be all that and more. The important part though is mommy isn't there for what ever reason.

I don't really want him to reconnect with her, but he needs to see her in the next scene if he wants to find out why she is there. Xander honestly looks and seems happy except for Buffy of all people tracking him down. If it's been 5 years, why does she think he would want to talk to her if at all ever again in her life? I'm not being mean. There are tons of people I haven't spoken to and haven't reconnected with. That's actually normal.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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