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Review of chapter "Hero System 2.0 Beta" from Sandi
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Do we want the Council knowing about this? This early Giles would have still called them I'd think. If it's different could you explore why? Thank you. Great idea. (+ 25 to Cordy?! Is Cordy attracted to Willow? An idea.)
Review By [Sandi] • Date [24 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hero System 2.0 Beta" from Myauzo
Review:
Can you please make this into a real story
Review By [Myauzo] • Date [24 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hero System 2.0 Beta" from JediKnight
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Enjoying the idea for 'Hero System'.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [24 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hero System 2.0 Beta" from djhardim
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Question on 'photographic reflexes'.

Suppose that they aren't physically up to carrying out a move that they have seen.

Later, they work out until they reach the point where they can carry out the move they saw earlier.
Will they be able to carry out that move, or is there a time limit?

EDIT: I plead ignorance of what is involved with photographic reflexes, particularly its limitations.
Comments from author:
Why would there be a time limit?
Review By [djhardim] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hero System 2.0 Beta" from Bobboky
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Nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hero System 2.0 Beta" from DragonBard
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This is going to be very cool.

I hope you keep up with this, maybe turn it into a full fic.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hero System 2.0 Beta" from feynstrom
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So, Willow with the Horn Dog flaw...
Willow and Xander, both with the Horn Dog flaw - together - and Willow has bought off her shyness that kept her from approaching Xander before...
That's gonna end in extensive extracurricular activities.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hero System 2.0 Beta" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Toy Soldier 2" from Darksnider
Review:
Hopefully Tony gets Xanders Wisdom and Xander gets Tony's Intelligence.
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hero System 2.0 Beta" from raxadian
Review:
It would be fun if when Buffy arrives she also seems to be a Player Character, but unlike the rest, she is playing in Hard mode. So cheats don't work on her, and she didn't keep any items from Easy and Normal Mode. But once she beats Hard mode, she can take non plot Items and a few characters with her to other games.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hero System 2.0 Beta" from LadyFoxFire
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OK I have to admit that I'm disappointed that you didn't bring Jesse into the game (yet) Seems that Jesse has become the what Xander was to Buffy and Willow in later esp. (too early in the morning to remember the word)
Comments from author:
No, this is Willow wanting some time alone with Xander, she has plans.
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hero System 2.0 Beta" from dcarson
Review:
With a couple of months for Xander and Willow to get up to speed Buffy is going to be so confused when she arrives. Xander will have a Buffycave all ready for her and Willow will have maps to all the known vampire and demon sites.
Review By [dcarson] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Toy Soldier 2" from Bobboky
Review:
very good stuff
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Toy Soldier 2" from cyberfish
Review:
Good ,good ,what`s gonna happen when they find out that Xander Can`t go home .He`s stuck With the Avengers and the Marvel Universe
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [22 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Toy Soldier 2" from randomguy
Review:
"Now seriously, can I get some pants?"

Really enjoying this storyline. A new completely new twist on Haloween. Can't wait to see where you take it. One suggestion though.

The "collapsible adamantium framework in his testicals" absolutely requires testing - She-Hulk, Ms Marvel would work but given Xander's dating habits probably the most likely would be the super villain Titania (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mary_MacPherran).
Review By [randomguy] • Date [22 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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