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Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong" from Difdi
Review:
Scary thought: does The Key count as an object for improvement purposes? If it does, does Dawn get an upgrade when The Key does?

Given enough time and effort (which Dawn would probably enjoy) you might wind up with a Dawn who will completely annihilate Glory when she shows up...
Comments from author:
Trying to upgrade 'The Key' would drop you in an item world where Glory would end up road kill. No, Dawn will have to level up on her own as a character class.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [17 Jul 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Futurama" from Difdi
Review:
Mensa mixer, that's great!
Review By [Difdi] • Date [17 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Nooooo! Don't leave it there, sob! Oh what am I saying, there will be future chapters... Carry on!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong" from Bobboky
Review:
i want to see more of this last one.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong" from Infinix
Review:
Seemed pleasant and well written right up until the author note. Please right more. Pretty please. More well written Disgaea stories are badly needed.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Okay, a Disgaea could be a fun story.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Good Turn Deserves Another" from Midnmax
Review:
I wonder if the blood is actually blood or if it is holy water with red food coloring...
Comments from author:
It's actual blood, he was completely honest with everything he did, not his fault that vamps assume he was lying.
Review By [Midnmax] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Good Turn Deserves Another" from BaileyMatutine
Review:
What was the chapter number for the earlier part of this story, where Xander promises to share his soul?
Comments from author:
Can't recall off the top of my head, but yes this was a possible route that could take.
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A12R4" from Lictre
Review:
The reason Ranma meeting Salem might be an issue is that Ranma has an incredibly dramatic deep fear of cats, though the mentioned somebody-else's-problem field might keep Ranma from actually noticing Salem.

Ranma, if confronted with enough cats, (either in number or in size), he has a tendency to enter a near berserk state where he/she acts like a cat, and is capable of apparently manifesting claws made of Ki that enable him to pretty casually shred things, such as trees...

I suspect that the reason Rumiko Takahashi gave Ranma that fear, and gave the character Shampoo a curse that turns her into a cat, was to prevent a repeat of what happened in Urusei Yatsura, where the exotic foreigner (Lum) wound up becoming the favored female of the series, rather than the (supposedly) normal local girl (with volcanic rage issues that could involve throwing desks). Shinobu (Urusei Yatsura) and Akane (Ranma 1/2) are thematically very similar characters.

Response to Author: I was positive you knew about the neko-ken, but I was tossing the info up so that it could be read by the reviewer calling themself "proofreader" could be informed, as well as those for whom Ranma is an obscure fandom.

The most relevant information I accidentally buried in the first paragraph, about the SEP field making Salem meeting Ranma a non issue, then I rambled, which I occasionally do. This is why, when I write, I generally hold my work, then re-read about a week later, to pare out the ramblings and digressions. (usually while chanting something on the order of "I'm an idiot, why did I put this in?" at myself.)
Comments from author:
I know about the Neko-Ken, however the review that commented about it said they guessed the two had not met, which really makes no sense. I don't believe I made any comments in the story that might relate to the two and their interaction.
Review By [Lictre] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Good Turn Deserves Another" from Omegaprime
Review:
Now that is Evil in a strange, twisted and funny way.

How will the gang react when they find that trap?

This is one of the reasons that Xander should never get vamped.

Keep up the interesting work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Good Turn Deserves Another" from LFW
Review:
I am darn amused at how Xander is being nice to the neighbor vampires but I do have to wonder if the blood is safe out like that? Should it be chilled?
After all Xander does not want to give a vampire an upset stomach right?
Thanks
Looking forward to more from you
Review By [LFW] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Good Turn Deserves Another" from CageFire
Review:
Hehe, great new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Good Turn Deserves Another" from Dragonwolftiger
Review:
Somehow I doubt that that's what Vamp Willow had in mind *snicker*
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Good Turn Deserves Another" from JediKnight
Review:
Eh?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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