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Review of chapter "Cousins" from Dragonbaita
Review:
I KNOW you hear this ENDLESSLY but could you PLEASE make this a full story?
It DESERVES to be more than a oneshot!
Review By [Dragonbaita] • Date [29 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mission to Mars" from Himuradono
Review:
Mars awoke and things just got real. Looks like a recipe for a curbstompy fic. ;)
Review By [Himuradono] • Date [27 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cousins" from Michaelsuave
Review:
I wrote this in ffnet, but I will say it again, this idea of xander as a natural shaman and necromancer mixing with hp has a lot of possibility. Would love to see this plot bunny bite you on the nuts and jot let go until you wrote more of this... then again, that sounds painful. I just hope you write more of this, no need for a plot bunny with a mean streak a mile long. Cheers!
Review By [Michaelsuave] • Date [27 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins" from JediKnight
Review:
Enjoying the work on this latest idea you posted.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
This is SUCH a tasty plotline! Please, pick it up and continue it?!?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins" from Alyssara
Review:
If the Muses allow, I would love to see this one turned into a full story! Great premise :-)
Review By [Alyssara] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cousins" from Bobboky
Review:
Cool work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cousins" from oldgirllost
Review:
I like all stories where Xander is Harry Potter's cousin, guardian, adopted father etc I wish someone would work this up
Thanks
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cousins" from hpssslashfan
Review:
I really hope you expand on this one.

Xander is the kickass prophecy breaker and just thinking of him getting involved in that little Scottish dust-up and taking out both Dark Lords with truth, would be awesome. *snort*

And YES anyone who deliberately raises a child in darkness and misery, intending on sacrificing him to war and setting him up for a martyrs death, before he is even 18 years old, is NOT a good guy, no matter how much he twinkles!

And the "One Who See's" would so see the indoctrination from a 100 miles away. After all, people forget that Dumbles is defacto, supreme ruler of this backwards little community and Moldy is trying to usurp his power and position.
Review By [hpssslashfan] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins" from Dragan
Review:
This one looks extremely promising! A shamanistic type of power might be why Giles missed it.
Review By [Dragan] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins" from LadyAvarice
Review:
This and the last chapter So need to be expanded. Nice work!
Review By [LadyAvarice] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins" from iamjmph
Review:
another great chapter. I'd love to see more of this. Thank you for all time and energy spent on your stories, and for sharing them with us. Have a great day
Review By [iamjmph] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cousins" from WingL
Review:
I just wanted to say that I like the pieces that you put up (even though I don't say it enough) and look forward to more. I especially liked this piece as I also enjoy Harry Potter crossovers.

Thank you.
Review By [WingL] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins" from TroyGuffey
Review:
A most interesting start. The end explains why the spells go wonky around Xander.

I really like stories where the "wand wankers" of Britain are being deliberately blind about other forms of magic (rather than those other forms not existing)

So, are you going to get Xander a teacher? (I might suggest you "borrow" Joyce's father, Mr. Ellis, from "Waifs and Strays".)

(It would be nice if you could "Like" reviews, some other people had some good ideas. Neville being trained as a druid by Xander's teacher would be nifty.)
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
This has some great potential. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
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