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Review of chapter "Cousins 5" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cousins 5" from Omegaprime
Review:
Wow, Neville must have some serious stones if he feels that he has to create potion accidents in front of Snape so that he can overcome his fears.

And I see that Xander's and Tara's training is going well even though they don't know what the heck is going on.

Keep up the interesting work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [20 Nov 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins 5" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice work on the update
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [20 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins 5" from Oxnate
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I'm absolutely in love with the idea that Neville is a potions genius who likes messing with Snape.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [19 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong 2" from HappyWonKinobi
Review:
I kinda want this story to become a fully fledged one like you did with Hero System. This sounds like it would work wonderfully, especially with the way your mind works. All in all, I really enjoy just about everything you put out and can't wait for more! :)
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [19 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins 5" from raxadian
Review:
This story would work just fine without Harry Potter characters.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [19 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong 2" from Balder
Review:
I love this one and hope you continue it.
Sorry, it seems like I say that about all your stories but it's true! I want more of this! Xander fighting for some of his ladies, nudity, and we get to see Dawn kick ass. What could be better
Review By [Balder] • Date [19 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong 2" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting, just not sure I get the crossover.
Comments from author:
Disgaea.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong 2" from (Current Donor)Truthmaker
Review:
Pillage, then burn.

Always great advice!

I hope you continue this one.
Review By [(Current Donor)Truthmaker] • Date [18 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong 2" from Dragan
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Pillage then Burn, always good advice :)
Review By [Dragan] • Date [18 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong 2" from Sdarian
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Neat. Looking forward to more of this.
Review By [Sdarian] • Date [18 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong 2" from EdBecerra
Review:
Honestly? Any story that makes it to three chapters or more deserves a breakout as a story of its own.
Review By [EdBecerra] • Date [18 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong 2" from KrisB
Review:
I loved it. I read through the comments and couldn't believe folks didn't get that it was a disgaea cross.

Actually, I went back to see the first part of this. It was pretty much just an intro scene where they are teleported into the item. I'm guessing you'll be having this version of Dawn's key ness being more of the person that runs the item world stand or maybe the gate keeper as well. I can actually see her doing combo duty. But that's far later and down the line. Right now, they need to figure things out.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [18 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong 2" from JakStrife
Review:
Whoa dude, what the hell is this based on? Sweet thing going though. Make them all have a threesome. Xander deserves it!
Comments from author:
disgaea
Review By [JakStrife] • Date [18 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Donkey Kong 2" from cyberfish
Review:
What game is this story based on?
Comments from author:
disgaea
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [18 Nov 14] • Not Rated
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