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Review of chapter "Chapter One:" from leonamasha
Review:
So glad to have found this story! Would love to read more whenever you get a chance to post some more. Great start!!
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [7 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One:" from Loatroll
Review:
Good stuff! Thanks for the great read :-)

I'm very interested in seeing what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind review, Loatroll. I really appreciate it. I'm currently working on the second chapter, so I hope to have it out soon.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [20 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One:" from Traveler
Review:
Good start, please continue and thanks for sharing with us.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, Traveler and I'm glad you're liking the story. I'm halfway through the second chapter, so I should hopefully have it out in a day or so.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [19 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One:" from misterq
Review:
Interesting to see where you go with this..


Also, the winner for the most amusing typo is:

"Ethan simply hoped for the best, closed his eyes and called forth the chaos magic that would be required to give these costumes life once the invocation to anus was made."
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, misterq. Damn...didn't catch that typo. Thank you for pointing it out. Despite multiple revisions, I keep finding new mistakes.
Review By [misterq] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One:" from CubsKing
Review:
Excellent beginning to the story!

I think it could be very interesting to read something where the "Old Man" isn't the oldest Immortal on the block...

Can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, CubsKing. I felt the same way too. I love Methos being the "Old Man", but I was curious as to what would happen if someone was introduced as being older than him. As far as this story is concerned, Xander created the backstory for his and Cordy's characters to be Original Immortals. I'm not sure what that will mean later on, but it gives me room to play around with certain attributes that are standard with regular Immortals but maybe different with the Originals.
Review By [CubsKing] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One:" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Great first chapter. Hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, Studyofchaos. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story as it comes out.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One:" from OlBear
Review:
This story could be very interesting. Hope to see more soon
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review OlBear. I'm working on the next chapter today, and I'll hopefully have it out soon.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One:" from Maeven
Review:
great start, looking forward to more!

ps: Giles was reading a tome, not a tomb :)

|Maeven
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, Maeven and I appreciate the correction. Even after all that revision, I know there will still be errors. I'm def looking to see if I can find a beta to help me out. The spelling mistake has now been corrected, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter when it comes out.
Review By [Maeven] • Date [18 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One:" from Snowdove
Review:
Excellent beginning. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. The next chapter will have the Halloween story and the changes that occur with the Scoobies.
Review By [Snowdove] • Date [18 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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