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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from StoicLast
Review:
:0 this story is full of win! It's the crossover I never realized I wanted. I love how each character dies and is shaped by their supposed death.
Comments from author:
Thanks - the original Machine of Death stories are fascinating, it was a hard act to follow.
Review By [StoicLast] • Date [11 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Excellent. The last one was very sad. Loved it.
Comments from author:
Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [23 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting piece. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [22 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dhampyr
Review:
Nice. Although, technically, isn't Natasha all but ageless due to whatever knockoff of Cap's super soldier serum and Fury's infinity serum that Russia cooked up and injected her with when she "graduated" from Red Room?
Comments from author:
That's why I was vague about when she dies.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [21 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hecatonchires
Review:
Loved it
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [20 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
I wonder what would be Frank Castle's card xD. Maybe something related to old age?.
Cool fic, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
No idea on that one, just too many possibilities.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [20 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dmitri
Review:
This is a rather depressing short story, but it is still enjoyable. Thanks for posting it here. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks - given the nature of the story it's difficult not to be depressing. Maybe I should have given one or two of them funnier fates, but it didn't feel right somehow.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [20 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
Review:
I'm reminded of Robert Heinlein's first published story, "Life-line", about a man who invents a machine that predicts when people will die.
Comments from author:
I'm pretty sure it was a big factor in the creation of the Machine of Death concept. That goes back to one of the Dinosaur Comics stories, so proving it would be difficult.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [20 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DofEire
Review:
Brrrrr, chills. Excellent.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [DofEire] • Date [20 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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