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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very cute!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [31 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TrevaRea
Review:
Funny... liked it. Actually wouldn't mind seeing more.
Review By [TrevaRea] • Date [22 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
I'm following how many of your stories now? :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [22 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rich
Review:
Okay, I like this one. I especially like the dialogue - only Buffy (and maybe Faith) would find news of an impending apocalypse relaxing.
Review By [Rich] • Date [22 May 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AceDreamer
Review:
This works pretty well, I think you've done a good job of mixing character introduction with story.

I see you've gone for classic Scoobies plus Tara. Return of the Queller demon/aliens? Alien colony of magic-using demons somewhere that can access Earth? (The Queller demons might be only minions, after all.)
They may have stuck her in a school, but I'd strongly suspect Dawn would sneak in pretty soon. And, be promptly kidnapped by aliens?

CSI involvement suggests aliens are doing something on Earth where better forensics than the Air Force can deploy, for some reason, presumably in Las Vegas, has become a major issue. Alien probability manipulators? One found dead and the SGC called in about a possible Foothold?

I can see quite a few places you could take this. Nice start!
Review By [AceDreamer] • Date [22 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from gnurd
Review:
Hey, would love to see a oneshot series based on this. Good job.
Review By [gnurd] • Date [22 May 14] • Not Rated
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