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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Lydia
Review:
While on one hand the idea of this story is interesting their is one element that sucks and that is Buffy & Willow's costume, if anything they should have had each others costume on, Willow if she had watched the show would have known Minmei was a bad choice if she wanted to try to send a message to Xander, suiting up as Lisa would have sent the proper message and Buffy wanted to impress Angel, I really don't think suiting up as Lisa would have worked for that, instead she should have went as Minmei, that would actually have made sense. So yea, while the idea is interesting this element bum me out of it, because it doesn't make sense for those two to have taken the costumes they did, all it would serve is trying to force a Xander / Buffy pairing that frankly shouldn't happen.
Review By [Lydia] • Date [20 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from CubsKing
Review:
Well, this is an interesting story. I can't say I'm familiar with Robotech, other than what I've read in other crossovers on here, but I know Stargate very well. It'l be interesting to see how much this changes things in that series...

Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more soon!
Review By [CubsKing] • Date [18 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Grovtech
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I think Willow would not under any circumstances go dressed as Lynn Minmei. Talk about one of the most universally disliked characters ever! I went to a con where they had a burn Minmei party torching her in effigy. I could see Buffy taking this part because, one: she is unfamiliar with the series. Two: She trying to be really feminine for Angel.

Also remember Willow knows Lisa MARRIED Rick and she's trying to get Xander's attention who is dressed as Admiral Hunter, Duh!

I really like the story, but geez Minmei?

Grover
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Omegaprime
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Well, well, it looks like the Father and Son take over the Earth Family Fun time event has been canceled because of health problems, good show.

And the gang has been saved from death and a very stupid court case on that crazy planet.

Now we get to see who dressed up as who now that the spell is over.

But now they have to face a few more problems including one named Kinsey.

Hmmm, I wonder if news travels fast in space?

It looks like this thrown rock is going to cause tidal waves and interesting times in the pond known as the Milky Way Galaxy.

Keep up the interesting work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from DieselDriver
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I don't have a problem with the way the chapter ended. Who had time for a reaction anyway? That's exactly the sort of thing "the next exciting episode" would bring. My only problem is that I've read so many other things since the previous parts of this story that I need to go back and read them again to refresh my memory. I bet I can do that before you publish chapter 7... LOL
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from AnFan
Review:
Great chapter, thanks!

I wonder if the attack will peter out before it reaches the asteroid field? Probably, given distances in space, but it would have been funny to see the reaction in the SGC to the energy staying coherent that far :)

Can't wait to see the reaction of the costumed people. Next update, I'm going to have to go back and reread the entire story instead of just the previous chapter. Can't really remember who dressed as who. Not a disappointment though, I have really too much time on my hands and having something to read is always a good thing.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Please have these chapters come out fast if at all possible! Loving it! And great chapter.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from wjenks
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Very nice
Review By [wjenks] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from thundernaruto
Review:
Great chapter Update soon
Review By [thundernaruto] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Dragan
Review:
Nice cliffhanger! :)


Confirming Who-who will be interesting :)
Review By [Dragan] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from cyberfish
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Great ,just great .Hope to see the next chapter soon
Review By [cyberfish] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from hamishog
Review:
This is the first Robotech crossover I've ever read. Wicked show. I watched it sometimes but my sister wouldn't let her kids watch it. She turned it on once and there was a knife fight.
May you live in interesting times, indeed...
Review By [hamishog] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Balder
Review:
Great story!
Review By [Balder] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Not Rated
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