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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from eriktheviking
Review:
Cracking good story, well done.
Comments from author:
once again...thamk-you,
D.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from raxadian
Review:
Since you love to write about army girls, how about Buffy and Faith being reborn as female Klingon warriors?
Comments from author:
Ah, well I might if I hadn't lost interest in Star Trek (apart from ST:OS) some years ago and back then Klingons just weren't Klingons!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [15 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
This was one of your best. I liked the ending--a lot.

Thank you for sharing it.
Comments from author:
Thank-you for reviewing!

D.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [14 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from rafestark
Review:
Just caught up on last couple of chapters - good stuff, very happy to see that Buffy bayoneted the hell outta Predator. (albeit after he was softened up by some bullets)

He made the same mistake as most people in not seeing her as a threat during their first encounter! Although he probably revised judgement after she bust his knee.

A slayer named Edwina is almost as cruel as a soldier named Myron.

Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

Yep, Edwina was the silliest girls name I could come up with at the time of writing.

Soldiers named Myron can only get away with it if they're officers, which is why nearly all British army officers seem to be named 'Rupert'!

Cheers,
D.

PS: As Corporal Jones might say, "Predators? They can't abide the cold steel, they do not like it up 'em!"
Review By [rafestark] • Date [7 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from draconis
Review:
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Much improved over stories 1-3. I guess I'm a sucker for action/romantic/comedy (story4) and action/romantic (story5). I found both 4 and 5 to be quite colourful and filled with good imagery.

I would have preferred more content in story 5 over story 4 but both were quite well written. It was nice to see Buffy finally got to live a "normal" life...although I thought her life in story 4 was also pretty much "normal" once she and Kali went to Britain (althoooouuugh...it IS the British we're talking about there, so "normal" is a fairly flexible concept). Based on no mention in story 4 made of Buffy and Kali keeping their Slay on, even though it would have been in character for both characters to do so. I suppose doing so however would have drawn undesirable attention from the Council.
Comments from author:
Horses for courses in-it?

I always thought you damned colonials were weird myself but there you go.

Yes on reflection I think I could have made Sympathy longer...but it was one of those stories where I wrote the first chapter and then wrote the rest several months later!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [draconis] • Date [5 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Well, this was a nice, earlier era take on the Predator series. I look forward to your next story.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

As I mentioned at the beginning of the fic this is likely to be the last 'Freefall' story. However, I've got plenty of other stuff that needs posting.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Xovervore
Review:
Buffy killed the pred so quickly that it didn't get time to say, "What the hell are you?" LOL [And yes I am aware that in the original film it was simply mimicking what Dutch said].
The scene with Buffy persuading her mother to call her Buffy was a blast! It also means her name is a Closed Time Loop situation.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from ShyBob
Review:
Nicely done. I kept worrying that Buffy was going to get the short end of the stake, and was pleasantly surprised by the ending (even though it was a little horrific). Excellent color added by way of the soundtrack/chapter titles :)
Comments from author:
The links to the vids was a sort of after thought, glad you liked the idea.

Glad you enjoyed,
Cheers,
D.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Jazzibear
Review:
Top marks, that man! Like totally!

Seriously though, it’s an excellent story, one of your best, and I enjoyed it greatly. Very well done!

I look forward very much to your next offering. Soon, please?
Comments from author:
Thanks, I seem to have struck a chord with this one.

Next I'm considering the first of my Starship Troopers Fics, 'The Ever lasting glory'. I'm not 100% happy with the first couple of chapters so who knows. As I've still got loads to post I expect I'll have something out by this time next week.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Mcspender
Review:
Ah, the Pred got taken out very nicely by Buffy and the team, oooh yeah xD!!!.
Ah, it was so cool seeing Buffy and Myron living a... not so long, but a very full life together; and well, my vote goes too for a younger Buffy and Myron reunion... that's is if you're planning a sequel to this tale =).
But if you're not, this could be a good ending for this series, with a more centered Buffy looking for her family.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

See my comment to Marcus.

Although I did and am considering a sequel I'll probably not do it. I often think it best that my readers form their own ideas as to what happened next.

D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from bradsan
Review:
very good story. enough of everything, action, romance, normal things etc.

great writing.
Comments from author:
Thank-you very much.

D.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from TroyGuffey
Review:
Very nice story. I hope Buffy Goldman wasn't in pain when she died in bed.
Comments from author:
I don't think she was...

The Death scene was based on the scene in 'House' where Wilson's girlfriend Amber died.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Rich
Review:
I liked this one. Buffy got the normal life she'd always wanted, and died happy just in time to go back to work. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank-you,
D.
Review By [Rich] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Starfox
Review:
Very good ending for the story - though it does cry out for a sequel, young reborn Buffy meeting her husband and kids and grandkids...
Comments from author:
See my comment to Marcus further down the page.

The ending as posted was a sort of after thought when I decided to stop this series. However, as you say it does tempt me with the idea of a sequel.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Starfox
Review:
Buffy 1, Predator 0

Good chapter. Love the budding romance between the L.T. and Buffy, and the details of making camp in such a situation. The chase and fight scene was well done.
Comments from author:
Thank-you,
D.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
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