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The Problem of the Ancients

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Review of chapter "Pargon" from Chan
Review:
Oh dear a shepard manages to find the nearest bit of trouble doesn't she.
Review By [Chan] • Date [12 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tier" from (Past Donor)Aynot
Review:
You are a terrible, horrible tease, to update, finally, then quit/finish the chapter before I am ready for it to be done! Then to casually mention you already have another chapter ready and say you are posting it some nebulous time soon. When, when? .....okay I will try to be patient. :(

Now seriously, your writing is top-notch. You have also conveyed confusion without the fairly standard feeling of "well that could have been done better." Or leaving the reader inappropriately confused. ("The mystic" flashes mixed with survivors quilt?)

Also, even though you have had Admiral Hackett seem to understand Andrea is not from their future, you seem have him acting as if the circumstances on Eden Prime are not as Andrea described to him in her report she may not be telling the truth. OR is it that it would be the only way to prove it to others that she is telling the truth. That is the only point that I was unclear about.
Comments from author:
Hackett understands that she's not from _their_ future, but that doesn't mean that what she describes is necessarily false. The use of Eden Prime is to both verify part of her story and show that well, the Reapers are the threat she believes them to be.
Review By [(Past Donor)Aynot] • Date [10 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Aynot
Review:
I am really looking forward to seeing more of this story. It is very good so far, I hope it continues.

Also, I am only vaguely aware of the Mass Effect settting and the other setting not at all is there any critical information that I should know?
Comments from author:
Eternal Darkness: Sanity's Requiem is a Gamecube game that is very much Cthulhu mythos-lite. It's one of the best early Gamecube games, and is the originator of the sanity system in all games. You can find a number of excellent Let's Plays on youtube.

As for Mass Effect, this fic is taking the main character who has been through all three games and thrusting her back into her own past, only not quite. The assumptions made are that you know the basics of Mass Effect, Element Zero, planets, and races. I'm not going to go into super detail describing each race when Shepard encounters them.
Review By [(Past Donor)Aynot] • Date [9 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marcel
Review:
An interesting start but... the story is marked as complete. Did you mean to continue?
Comments from author:
Ah... I fixed that issue. Might take a little to proliferate.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [7 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chan
Review:
Well that's one hell of a start to an adventure gotten me curious as to how things are going to shake out wondering how the shepards will prove themselves to be a thorn in the side of the newest threat.
Review By [Chan] • Date [7 Jun 14] • Not Rated
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