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Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from terrence
Review:
I adore her relationship with Tony and can't wait for the next part!
Review By [terrence] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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Great story. Ending's a bit abrupt, but that's a minor thing. You accomplished a lot with this relatively short story. Looking forward to what comes next.

Thanks

Blue
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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this is an awesome story and I am so glad you came back to it. I hope the next part will be out soon. looking forward to it. So does she go back? I get the impression she will.glad Tony got the chance to be an adult about things. lol thanks again for sharing
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from ShyBob
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Even though it's through, I've enjoyed Buffy's adventures in Tonyland. Is their brainstorming session going to result in awesome toys for the restored Scooby Gang?
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [11 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from slmncpm
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i love this story, i am excited that you are writing more of it. can you link it to this story so i am sure not to miss it? *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [11 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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You've got a great talent for storytelling, this story grabbed me and pulled me in until I finished it. You have also done very well by the characters, they all sounded like themselves and I had no trouble visualizing them and their expressions and words as I read. Thank you for sharing this, I really enjoyed it and will be tracking further stories by you, especially in this series. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [11 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from Misty
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Thank you for the fab story! Glad to know there is more x
Review By [Misty] • Date [10 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from bradsan
Review:
Awww the end already. Wonder if Buffy goes back. In a few months she will be eighteen and a adult. So she can do whatever she wants. I really hope she will stay and go underground. Tony has the money and Pepper, Happy etc. has the connections. they could never find her if she don't want to.

About what some reviewers tells you about Joyce could get the FBI involved. I don't think that Buffy will aloud that. Joyce also never did get to the police and told them her daughter was missing. She never once took it to the police. Makes you wonder. She never ever did anything to find her daughter. In this story Giles is looking for her and keeps Joyce updated. Not the police.

I also don't think Joyce will force Buffy to go back if they can convince her that she is save with Tony and the others.
I also think it won't be a strong case if they tried to nail Tony. Joyce drank a lot and threw her only daughter out of her house. also with Joyce Buffy grades went down, she is known by the police etc. I don't think any Judge will take those things light. Tony took the daughter into his house, she never was in trouble around him, she even has a job and did good. Tony was a drunk but that same drunk did keep Buffy safe and of the streets and treated her better than the others should have.

Nope she could lose Buffy completely if she tried to do that. The scary part. The Council could win everything if she ever goes to the FBI.

Oh men I hate this one is finished. Arggh

great story and good writing. thank you for sharing
Review By [bradsan] • Date [10 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from raxadian
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Buffy... running away doesn´t solve anything.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from Starfox
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Sweet scene. Nice to know both can be mature if it's needed.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [10 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from thewrongalice
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(Whining) but I don't want it to end... :-) Thanks for writing it and hoping for more!
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [10 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from RevDorothyL
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Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you! :-)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from ChefJackButler
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Its called "Willing Suspension of Disbelief", something that Baron Screw-Head has apparently never heard of. If you cannot get your readers to accept the premises of your story, they won't enjoy it and will, in fact, think that you're just not that good a writer. In this case, you're having the characters do stupid things for stupid reasons, and given that none of the characters in question are stupid, it strains the credibility of you as a writer.

And it has nothing to do with Xander or Buffy or whatever. Its all about you not writing a credible, believeable story.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from (Current Donor)BaronScrewtape
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Well done.

As to people saying your characters are morons, I don't see it. But then, usually I just translate someone calling someone else's writing as moronic as 'You did not write the story the way I would have or it conflicts with my worldview therefore it is stupid'.

Don't worry about how the 'real world' would work, because it usually doesn't operate the way people think it does, and it never reflects what we see on TV. If CSI was as effective as the show, there would be no unsolved cases after all.

I don't see Joyce going after anyone, as that would further alienate her daughter who will be eighteen in less than a year and therefore a legal adult free to leave her forever. Hell, Buffy could emancipate herself, with Tony's help, probably.

So ignore the people who are angry with you not writing the story they wanted, you did a good job. And this site needs more Buffy writers. Don't let the misguided Xander lovers (for some reason they hate Buffy, something their hero would vehemently disagree with them about) drive you away.
Review By [(Current Donor)BaronScrewtape] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17/Epilogue" from Valy
Review:
Love this story and now we so want to read about if they stay together or if Buffy gets a little help at the hellmouth or if Tony becomes Iron Man and comes to help Buffy. I thought that you did a wonderful job of ending this section of the story. Very happy to see that Buffy and Tony are both learning a little bit about growing up from each other.

Thank you for creating this very entertaining and interesting story,
Valy
Review By [Valy] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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