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Review of chapter "Let's eat Grandpa!" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very important educational message! :)
Comments from author:
Darn it! I was going for a very important educational massage. ;-)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let's eat Grandpa!" from rafestark
Review:
Haha, hopefully for Angel's sake Spike doesn't get the same idea...
Comments from author:
Careful, you might inspire more insanity.
Review By [rafestark] • Date [12 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let's eat Grandpa!" from AceDreamer
Review:
You might like to consider:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eats,_Shoots_%26_Leaves

Some of the stuff in there is truly remarkable. [grin]

Nice story, you might be giving people an appetite for more. [grin]
Comments from author:
It does look interesting. Though hopefully I'm already doing good enough not to need that book.
Review By [AceDreamer] • Date [11 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let's eat Grandpa!" from eriktheviking
Review:
This would get through to school kids, are you perchance a teacher?

Great fun, thanks.
Comments from author:
No. But my mother and my brother both are.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let's eat Grandpa!" from AceDreamer
Review:
Needs more salt?

Issues of Mastering grammar and innuendo...

For your next challenge, write a fanfic that's about the semicolon. [grin]

Or, possibly, Nested parentheses. [grin]
Comments from author:
I think this muse is tapped out for a while. But then again, I thought that after I originally posted too.
Review By [AceDreamer] • Date [11 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let's eat Grandpa!" from daveykins
Review:
Comments from author:
And apostrophes are the difference between knowing your shit and knowing you're shit.
Review By [daveykins] • Date [11 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let's eat Grandpa!" from Difdi
Review:
Yes, commas are indeed important. As legend has it, a man's life was once saved by a single comma. "Pardon impossible, to be sent to Siberia" and "Pardon, impossible to be sent to Siberia" have very different results, after all.
Comments from author:
Yep. Same thing here.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let's eat Grandpa!" from Omegaprime
Review:
Ow, ow, my brain. @_@'

Death by bad grammar.

Something The Master probably didn't expect.

Keep up the interesting work.
Comments from author:
No one expects the Spanish Inquisition! Our chief weapon is surprise, fear and surprise; two chief weapons, fear, surprise, and ruthless efficiency! Er, among our chief weapons are: fear, surprise, ruthless efficiency, and near fanatical devotion to the Pope! Um, I'll come in again...
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let's eat Grandpa!" from CPTSkip
Review:
Not quite as bad as the first chapter, but close. But once again you made me laugh.
Comments from author:
I'm trying to decide if I should start singing Bad To The Bone or Make 'em Laugh.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let's eat Grandpa!" from Mcspender
Review:
And here I am eating... an orange, thinking about just how messy are the grammar rules of the biutiful Language of Shakespeare.
And the only thing I can say is: LOL Engrish xD!!.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Engrish iz hard.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Overdose" from Mcspender
Review:
Evool joke is evool xD :P!.
See ya!!.

E.T.A.: Ya got Rekemundashion for the lolz had =D!.
Comments from author:
Kan i haz Rekum-

Kan I haz Rekemund-

Aww, forgetz it.



EDIT: FOR TEH LOLZ!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Overdose" from djhardim
Review:
And in the same vein - "Mistakes in Translation" by EdBecerra

http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-5325/EdBecerra+Mistakes+in+Translation.htm
Comments from author:
Thank you. That was very funny.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Overdose" from Omegaprime
Review:
It's amazing what chaos a simple spelling mistake can create in fantasy or real life.


Edit: Uh oh!!!

*Runs to the Panic Room*
Comments from author:
Hmm... you may have just inspired a second chapter.

EDIT:

Mwahahaha! (mine is an evil laugh)
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Overdose" from AceDreamer
Review:
That worked pretty well...

You'd need some really impressive minions, though, to pull off this trick. More intelligent hybrids of a Terminator and Doomsday? Also, you might wonder if they'd work for anyone else?

There's also the scene in the Afterlife, as the heroines get together to discuss what happened...

And, the fact that at least some of them wont stay dead, so, consequences for when they are up and about again...

Have you every considered a career as an author cleaning-up the remains of punsters - that would require titles like "Grime & Punnishment". [grin]
Comments from author:
Yes, I forgot the disclaimer that the story was completely cracked. But oh well. Next chapter is completely cracked too.
Review By [AceDreamer] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Overdose" from TheKnightofFaerie
Review:
That was evil. And I had to reread the last line a couple times before it sank in. Highly implausible, since I doubt the Master could have taken down Wonder Woman but amusing none the less.
Comments from author:
Of course he couldn't. But rule of funny...
Review By [TheKnightofFaerie] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Not Rated
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