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Review of chapter "Chapter 07" from (Recent Donor)amenti
Review:
This is amazing, I love these two crossovers. Not enough of these crossovers that are still active. Am still trying to find a finish story of a Hotch/Buffy relationship. Well done, can't wait for the next chapter. Am gasping for updates all the time haha
Review By [(Recent Donor)amenti] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 07" from writerdragonfly
Review:
This is beyond amazing.
Review By [writerdragonfly] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 07" from dreameralways
Review:
Yay! Chapter! Still loving this story. It is amazing. You make the crossover seem very plausible. I love it! I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Dreameralways,
Glad you think my blending of these two worlds is plausible. And I am really glad you love it. Unfortunately though, you have to wait for more. :):):):) I have to finish my Geography class before I can post another chapter.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [2 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 07" from ScorpioP
Review:
Very well done. I was pleased to see this, and look forward to the next chapter. I can't wait for the the big reveal to BAU!

As for the supernatural being treated as a secret by the government, I think of the nightlife (vamps, sorcerers, demons, etc.) as being somewhat analogous to terrorists, arms dealers, and the like. Even if the general public occasionally hears rumors about specific groups or incidents -- which probably get warped into horror movies -- most of the conflict is waged in secret, probably by top-secret "operators" equivalent to Navy Seals or Mossad. (My own head-canon says the Vatican probably has its own team of operators as well.) The Slayer just happens to be the champion we know best, and the Council had its own reasons for working in secret.
Comments from author:
ScorpioP,
I have been working on the big reveal. I am having a bit of trouble getting the next chapter started, so I thought I'd motivate myself by working on the climax of my story in between writing for school. I do have two more chapters already written, but I won't be posting either until after I complete my final paper and turn it in next weekend. After that, I shouldn't have as much trouble getting what I have written up, though I probably will break it up some.
Anyway, I think you're right about how the government in the BtVS verse would look at demons and dark magic wielders. They probably would refer to such groups as terrorists or international criminals. And the Vatican probably would have their own teams as well. But my guess would be that Buffy and the New Council are probably the best of the best, and would likely be asked by national governments in much of Europe, South America, and probably Africa, to take down hostile threats to the world.
Review By [ScorpioP] • Date [27 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 07" from Marcel
Review:
Thank you for the update. (I love long chapters, they give me time to get really immersed into the story.) I like how you're gradually revealing the truth to the BAU, and the mixing of truth and fiction is great ("training officer" for Giles, hehe).
Comments from author:
Marcel,
Glad you like it. I really felt it necessary to find away to explain parts of Buffy's world in terms the BAU would understand, since Buffy does not yet have clearance to explain what's really going on. And calling Giles a training officer, rather than a watcher, would suggest to the FBI that whoever taught Buffy to fight was legitimate, giving credence to the military's made-up tale that she was trained by the government. Anyway, the next update will be a week or two away. Gotta conquer the realm that is World Geography for school first.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [27 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 06" from dreameralways
Review:
So who was the guy and what did he do? At this point, it's obvious that getting Dawn into the area was part of their plan so i wonder what for. I look forward to more.

I meant the guy she saw in the airport who touched her bag. Perfect opportunity for someone to futz with her stuff.
Comments from author:
Dreamer,
I am not sure who you are referring to, unless you are talking about John Curtis. If you are, he was a season long villain in the ninth season of Criminal Minds, who stalked the entire team. He was referred to as the Replicator, because he copied the details of almost every one of the BAU's cases as he committed a number of murders to draw them into his game. He ended up murdering their boss, Erin Strauss, who was also Agent Rossi's love interest, before trying to kill the team in an explosion. Instead, he was tricked by Rossi, who caught him in his own trap and ultimately killed. In my story, Lilith and Gideon used their influence, including Lilith's magic, to get Curtis to act. This was done so the BAU wouldn't notice the murders of the other BAU agents across the country until the two vamps were ready to play with them.
If Curtis was not who you were referring to, please let me know who exactly you mean so I can explain it to you.
Flipside

Dreameralways,
That guy was just supposed to be just another passenger on Dawn's flight, but I may decide to have him be one of Lilith's human moles, who was following Dawn to the States.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 06" from TrevaRea
Review:
An update!! Thank you.. loved it.

I wish there was a crystal for each of them.

Treva
Comments from author:
Treva,
At this point, only JJ would know how it works. But I am glad you like this story.
Review By [TrevaRea] • Date [31 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 05" from TrevaRea
Review:
This is fantastic. I hope you keep going with it.

I'm really sad to see that Gideon is the bad guy. I wish there was some way to bring him back but that's not what's going to happen. :(

Treva
Comments from author:
Thank you for your positive comment, TrevaRea. I am going to try to get one more chapter posted before my class starts focusing on our final project next week. After that, it might be late September to early October before I can post again. I don't like leaving you guys hanging, but I have to focus on my college work before my personal writings. Thanks again.
Review By [TrevaRea] • Date [29 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 05" from (Current Donor)BaronScrewtape
Review:
Enjoying the story.
Been going back and rewatching criminal minds. While it fits the feel of criminal minds, Gideon coming to a bad end and becoming something he would hate with every fiber in his being is kind of depressing.

Side note: The actor who played Graham Miller is also the guy who played the man who shot Garcia, if you did not already know.

Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Baron,
Glad you like it so far. I have several more chapters written and hope to get the next one up soon. Don't know for sure when it will happen, cause I just started a new college class, which is a bit confusing right now. Gotta get a feel for it, I guess.
And if you think what I've done to Gideon so far is depressing, just wait. As much as I loved his character, I need him to be as evil as possible for my story. :):):):):):)
Side note: I didn't know that the actor who played Graham was also the guy who shot Garcia. Thanks for pointing that out. I won't be including that, since I didn't know. But it is good to know the facts.
Review By [(Current Donor)BaronScrewtape] • Date [26 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 05" from Misty
Review:
Oh shit! Thank you for another fab chapter x
Comments from author:
Misty,
Thank you so much. I am so thrilled that everybody likes what I've written. It's doing wonders for my confidence, and its really making look forward to working on this while I have my two weeks off from college. I can't wait to get to the beginning of this story's climax. I just hope it lives up to my and your expectations.
Review By [Misty] • Date [12 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 05" from dreameralways
Review:
Still so much fun. I hope Emily lives. You already killed Gideon, please let us keep Emily. I can't wait for more. LOVE this story.
Comments from author:
Glad you like things so far. And don't worry. There's still time for Buffy and the CM team to find Emily. And Em is tough. You know she'd never simply give in and let some demon kill her without a fight. Stay tuned for more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [12 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 04" from spk
Review:
WOW! Definitely an intense and suspenseful story so far.
Comments from author:
Spk,
Things are just gonna get more intense in the later chapters. So stay tuned.
Review By [spk] • Date [11 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 04" from dreameralways
Review:
NEED MORE! I love this story. It's great. How much longer must we wait for the next installment? Want. Please.
Comments from author:
Hopefully, after tomorrow, I can get the next part up. My final is due tomorrow, so once it's out of the way, I will have a couple of weeks before my next class starts. I plan on using that two weeks to relax and enjoy writing what I want. And that will include revising the next couple of chapters I have finished already, and getting started on the new ones. Thanks for reading.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [7 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 04" from Cristina
Review:
Wow, well now Buffy and Dawn have something incommon, both have doublers (if you go by comic or Angel TV show Buffy had double in Italy a slayer posing as her) trough Dawn's situation is different.
Trough I think Buffy overreacted on that thing, I know protective big sister and all, but I still think she overreacted there a bit, especially for such petty small thing. But that's not important...
Anyway great update. I am giddy in anticipating what will happen in that interrogation room. I do kind of think that Buffy wants them to know, so I doubt she' wont give them something (that they keep interest on her). And dawn oh Dawn...poor Reid...and Rossi, hey now Dawn has better reach for that kick in the shins that she owns him.
:P
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. I do need to alter the scene where Dawn meets Reid and the team just a bit. I just realized that I didn't have Reid have a real reaction to seeing what his unconscious mind will be telling him is Maeve's killer. But, Dawn will have a brief confrontation with the team, and Rossi in particular, in an upcoming chapter. And I am sure you can guess that she will be in no way happy about the BAU's accusations against her and Buffy. And also, Buffy isn't quite ready to give away everything, but she will start dropping hints about what's going on soon, so stay tuned.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [7 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 04" from purrfus
Review:
As much as I've enjoyed crossover stories that reveal quickly to get on with the 'real' action, it is really a great change of pace to see a story that is taking a bit more time. Classified / top secret really ought to mean something and slow is much more realistic - even for the BtVS crew. Thanks
Comments from author:
Purrfus,
I am glad you understand the slow pace. I wanted to do things this way because of how much distrust the Senate oversight committee at the beginning of season 7 and end of season 8 seemed to have for the BAU's Alpha team. The team did basically all go rogue to bring Ian Doyle to justice, which severely jeopardized their credibility in the eyes of their superiors. Because of this, I can see those same politicians fighting tooth, nail, and claw to keep them from learning the biggest and most heavily guarded secret in history. And that slow pace is going to start disappearing in the next chapter, as Gideon and Lilith begin their assault against the members of the Alpha team who were in the BAU during Gideon's final two years with the bureau. So it will be game on very soon in this story.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [29 Jul 14] • Not Rated
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