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Five 'Verses Where Pepper Potts Was Good...

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Review of chapter "Pepper vs. SkyNet" from Chan
Review:
Whoa if the damages to the suit continue then she's going to have to be a general and lead her people and somehow General Potts is scarily dangerous idea wonder how that would play out for the Human Resistance against the machines with Gen. Potts peering in the machine mind of skynet and effecting devastating strikes against Skynet if you write more of this I'll look forward to it eagerly.
Review By [Chan] • Date [3 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pepper vs. the Fraternity (Wanted)" from MageMan
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Review By [MageMan] • Date [1 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pepper vs. the Fraternity (Wanted)" from Chan
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Several someones are probably going to have a worse day than they've had to date watching Pepper go to war against the Frat. would be interesting possible body counts in the Tri digits.
Review By [Chan] • Date [1 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pepper vs. Stark Industries" from Chan
Review:
Owie that looks like it might quickly end with Potts being in an unmarked grave somewhere hopefully she'll be alert
Comments from author:
Glad you're paying attention. There's a reason I stopped where I did :(
Review By [Chan] • Date [1 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pepper vs. Umbrella Corporation" from Satori
Review:
I love this series. It's amazing. Pepper vs all the evil corporations!
Comments from author:
I don't think Pepper will be around long enough to take on Blue Sun (Firefly 'verse) but thanks for the support :)
Review By [Satori] • Date [14 Jun 14] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pepper vs. Umbrella Corporation" from ianquest
Review:
Please say you're going to be expanding these, because they're all awesome - but I'm seriously in love with Extremis!Pepper vs Umbrella. This particular war has got a lot of potential for a brilliant storyline...
Comments from author:
I'm toying with doing a follow-up for each 'verse, but at this point I'm not planning on going full-blown novel on any of these. Thanks for the vote of confidence on PvU!
Review By [ianquest] • Date [14 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pepper vs. Umbrella Corporation" from CPTSkip
Review:
Pepper Effing Potts is awesome! I liked all three stories so far and look forward to reading more.

Edit: I only 'send' positive reviews. Why jump on someone who is at least trying to write a story unless I can say something constructive or supportive? But I do write some nasty reviews but then I hit 'delete'. It sometimes cleanses the soul without inflicting bad karma on someone who has had the courage to write and send a story off into the cyber-either.
Comments from author:
You're just biased; you always give positive reviews :) We've got couple of dark chapters up ahead. I hope people don't hate me :(

ETA: Hah! BTDT with reviews, too.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pepper vs. Umbrella Corporation" from Avantre
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Badass Pepper is always great, but all she had to do was play a recording of that conversation where he basically said that he was going to create and take away a child of hers and hand it over to be played on the public news, and watch as Umbrella's stock fell through the floor as the public abandoned the company in disgust.
Comments from author:
And then the security budget would get slashed and Raccoon City would fall to the plague even earlier. At least that's what's in my mind ;)
Review By [Avantre] • Date [13 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pepper vs. Umbrella Corporation" from AsarStar
Review:
Ugh, this is awesome! I can't wait for the rest. :-)
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. I was kind of worried about each piece being different, and cliffhanger-y.
Review By [AsarStar] • Date [13 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pepper vs. Umbrella Corporation" from JJDudeman
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Badass superpowers Pepper is my favorite Pepper. This one ended too early! Very satisfying chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I thought maybe she was a little over the top, but Extremis is canon and Pepper is capable, so I figured it wasn't too much of a stretch. I had an ending where Pepper ran into security, got tased, melted the wires, and walked out like a Terminator but it didn't have the tone I wanted.
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [13 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pepper vs. Umbrella Corporation" from Mcspender
Review:
Pepper vs Umbrella deserves a longer history =D!.
Comments from author:
I've been reading so many Marvel/Iron Man/Avengers stories I just figured the reader could assume their favorite "close call" for Tony was TOO close. And leave room for a little bit of hope.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [13 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pepper vs. Umbrella Corporation" from MarcusRowland
Review:
I think I've missed this story until now - some very interesting ideas, it's a shame that none of the situations leave Pepper very happy. Looking forward to more
Comments from author:
Thanks! And this story's marked "horror" for a reason (we don't have a dark, tragic button). I got all inspired by twistedingenue's “The B-Team” http://archiveofourown.org/works/686799 featuring a dark AU where the Avengers sidekicks are the only ones left fighting the good fight.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [13 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pepper vs. Umbrella Corporation" from DianeCastle
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Pepper vs. Umbrella! This deserves a sequel or seven (assuming your muse is more cooperative than mine).
Comments from author:
No, wait! You can't set your expectations that high :( I'm still trying to flesh out the last two parts! Gonna have to beat that muse into submission :)
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [13 Jun 14] • Not Rated
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