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Review of chapter "Replay (Dawn/Kira Ford)" from Markelo
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OMG You turned Kira and Dawn to the Dyke Side.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [3 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Replay (Dawn/Kira Ford)" from Meneldur
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Well, this was fun. I don't know much about the fandom at all, but Kira certainly seemed awesome. She and Dawn were very fun. With that song especially, and the way Kira teased Dawn at the end there. Quite enjoyable, thanks for this.
Comments from author:
I'm not gonna lie, Kira's the basis for a lot of my versions of Dawn.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [20 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Replay (Dawn/Kira Ford)" from FireWolfe
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Yes the drugging was a bit much but I can see Buffy did it to keep her safe and perhaps Xander as well. I can also see Buffy being royally pissed at Dawn's actions. Everyone wanted a general but failed to realize war means people die. Mistake are made sometimes no one is perfect. Dawn stole money from her sister. Yes maybe Buffy was dead but they kept the illusion of her being alive and the house was hers as was the money and guardianship. Perhaps is Buffy did not have to work for a low wage to try to support her sister she might have been less tired and less reactionary or more patient with the teen. Actions have results some are bad. While Buffy messed up her mess ups were to save the world. Dawns were not. While she had a right to be angry at Buffy's actions she had no right to leave Xander stranded. He was only trying to help out . I say the tazering was fair payback for his actions. While I am not a fan of his actions he wanted to keep Dawn safe as well and I can give the guy credit for that even if the methods were wrong. However I can not see Dawn leaving any other way either. But you have a fair point about her being mad.
Comments from author:
You seem to be under the mistaken impression that Buffy was the only sister. Dawn would have been the rightful heir to the money with her mother and sister dead, and acted to preserve what was HERS at the time. I mean, she had no way of knowing whether or not Willow could pull off what she was claiming or if she even should. All she had was someone who wasn't a Summers blowing through the money that she and her sister had inherited from their mother upon her death. In the real world? Dawn could have - and should have - taken Willow to court and drained her to within an inch of complete financial collapse for her mishandling of that money. It happens regularly. What Willow did was completely illegal and immoral to boot.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Replay (Dawn/Kira Ford)" from DarthTenebrus
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At least Dawn gets to kick some ass, even if they aren't vamps...
Comments from author:
Damn straight. Sadly, the season with a vampire was three or four after the one with a cute punky girl I wanted to 'ship Dawn with.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Replay (Dawn/Kira Ford)" from djhardim
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It was my understanding that Joyce's medical bills exceeded the level of health insurance coverage that she had.
Comments from author:
As someone who has a rough idea of what commercial or mixed property goes for in Santa Barbara (of which Sunnydale is the Buffyverse analog) along with a life partner who experienced far more extensive medical treatment for not one but two bouts of cancer plus acute renal failure? I'm gonna have to call bullshit/poor research on that one.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Replay (Dawn/Kira Ford)" from FireWolfe
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Dawn as a thief makes sense. She bitched at Buffy for running now she does the same sadly I can see it. She was a bit of a brat in the series. As for Willow and the money thing. I always wondered about it. I never could figure out why Buffy was so screwed money wise but this explains it a lot.That or the council interfereing. Glad she did try the hero thing though. Anyway interesting one for the fem/slash day anyways.
Comments from author:
When your sister is willing to drug you and have you kidnapped shortly after you voted her off the island, I can see why someone would be willing to walk away when given the chance.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Replay (Dawn/Kira Ford)" from Vld
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*chuckles* Dawn is the American version of... Abare Pink? Like, the one Ahim, Gokaiger's princess, the one who would accept almost everything... refused fighting in because it was so... embarassing? AFTER she went as far as dress as a nurse, a policewoman, a bride, a SCHOOLGIRL... and STRIPPED (offscreen, unfortunately) to her UNDIES to get the Ranger Key?
The pink... Boar suit?

THAT'S DAWN's RANGER SUIT? BUAHAHAHA!!
Comments from author:
No, I've used an actual Pink Dino Thunder Ranger design across several stories. Usually with Cordelia inside it, but I made an exception here. Usually with a dilophosaurus zord, although sometimes I veer away from that if I'm also using my homemade Green Dino Thunder Ranger because I debuted her with that same zord first.
Review By [Vld] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Replay (Dawn/Kira Ford)" from CPTSkip
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Your story was both hot and amusing. I liked it and your version of Dawn.
Comments from author:
I like Dawn. ^_^
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Replay (Dawn/Kira Ford)" from raxadian
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Funny there is a popular fic in this site where Dawn is the Green Ranger.
Comments from author:
Different set of Rangers. There are others, including one that features Dawn in the Dino Thunder Rangers, but too many play on the key = Green Ranger. I thought it'd be funny to do something a little different, that also keeps in line with sentai traditions: in almost forty years of programming, there has never once been a double female team where the second female was not pink.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Replay (Dawn/Kira Ford)" from Harry
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* IN THE NIGHT, IN THE DISTANCE, SEE THEM COMING CLOSER, WITH THE FORCE OF AGES, FROM CENTURIES GONE BY. DEFENDERS OF THE NIGHT, PROTECTORS OF THE RIGHT . . . DINO RANGERS ROAR! POWER RANGERS SOAR! PROTECT US FROM THESE EVIL FORCES! DINO RANGERS ROAR! POWER RANGERS SOAR! PROTECT US FROM THESE EVIL FORCES . . . POWER RANGERS DINO THUNDER!* Outside of the original series, my FAVORITE version of Power Rangers! And Dawn as the Pink Ranger? Nice! Now, how about telling us how she got the Pink Gem. Be a interesting prequel.
Comments from author:
Well, the story does lay out something of that: she's been a Dino Thunder Ranger from the beginning with Kira, having received her gem during 'Day of the Dino' with the others. I might do something else in the future, but I was focusing on the relationship itself for this piece.
Review By [Harry] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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