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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AllenPitt
Review:
I figured Illyria would get involved. She agreed to send Natasha for her own reasons. Same thing for why she hangs around Dawn. So, Ymir/Illyria... best buds? Probably not...
Comments from author:
Yep, you're right. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from raxadian
Review:
Oh, I guess this happened because Odin is gone?
Comments from author:
I can neither confirm nor deny that. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [23 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Oxnate
Review:
The plot thickens like pudding on Thanksgiving and we mortals patiently wait our next serving.
Comments from author:
Well, there'll be more soon. Hopefully before Thanksgiving. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [19 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oxnate
Review:
Excellent start. It took me to the end of Avengers to figure out that the Invasion wasn't the endgame. Actually, I think it was Stark's speech.

Anyway, this line has some odd phrasing: -- Now all she needed was a way to figure out how to get there.
Comments from author:
I watched Thor 2 a looong time after I saw Avengers (a couple of months ago, in fact) and then this thought suddenly ambushed me. So I just had to write it, and then expand it, and so here we are.

Thank you for the correction. I'll sort that out.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [19 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from raxadian
Review:
Ah, Natasha is not stupid... is she?
Comments from author:
Nope, she's not.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [15 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AllenPitt
Review:
I suppose all the Marvel films to date can be regarded as opening gambits by Loki & Thanos in their separate bids to win ownership of all the Infinity Stones and create the Infinity Gauntlet... Unfortunately the heroes don't get to see those post-credit scenes, especially with the Collector. If they hear about the Guardians, then someone might figure out there are multiple Stones.
Nice to see Natasha at least realizing some of what's going on. I wonder what Illyria knows about the stones. They'd certainly be her ticket back to full godhood. And....I still wonder about Dawn and her Keyness. Could she be the embodiment of one of the stones?
Comments from author:
I can neither confirm nor deny any of that without making spoilers. But thanks for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
As I pointed out on another review, the Avengers movie was almost certainly just one big Briar Patching con job by Loki - and it worked, all according to plan. Rather obviously, he had no actual plans to rule the Earth. His grand "defeat" by the heroes was his ticket back home - where he needed to be for the next phase of his plans.

At the end of Thor 2, we see that things are proceeding just as he had wished. He's on the throne of Asgard and how many of the Infinity Stones are now within his reach (or that of his cohort/patron, Thanos)?

Nearly the whole Marvel Cinematic Universe are puppets dancing to his tune, and so far they're all utterly clueless about it. I love it. :-)
Comments from author:
I know! It took me a while to work out that's what he'd done, too - the thought just suddenly dropped into my head one day, and I had to make a story out of it.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [13 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from raxadian
Review:
Ah, Loki pretending to be Odin? Eventually his ego will get the better of him.
Comments from author:
Possibly. Quite possibly.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [13 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bobboky
Review:
Very nice work
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from raxadian
Review:
If Loki s hiding himself, Natasha will have a hard time finding him.
Comments from author:
Very true. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AsarStar
Review:
Glad you decided to continue this. Looking forward to more. :-)
Comments from author:
Thank you. There'll be more along soon.
Review By [AsarStar] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from MarcusRowland
Review:
If Illyria can do that, all of Asgard's security is now worthless. I'm surprised that "Odin" let himself get distracted from that so easily. And if Natasha thinks about it, she may be surprised too, and wonder why he lost interest as soon as she said Loki might be alive.
Comments from author:
I plan to expand on that in the next chapter, but yes, Illyria is certainly going to prove interesting to the Asgard.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RevDorothyL
Review:
With Sif AND Natasha both on the case, Odin/Loki may be sorry he indulged his sense of mischief and superiority to the extent of giving them a whole week to find him out. :)

Thanks for continuing this! I'm looking forward to whatever comes next.
Comments from author:
He might be. Or, as the ruler of the Asgard, he might be looking forward to messing with their investigations as much as possible.

Thanks for reviewing. There'll be more along soon.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
Review:
Suppose just suppose, that the reason he chose Earth and faked his death is because Loki wants a fresh start without being judged for who he was like he would be if he stayed himself and tried starting over.
Comments from author:
It's a reasonable supposition, and one that will be explored in the expansion that I will (probably) eventually get around to writing.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [2 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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