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Review of chapter "Sunday and beyond" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I like the way it all blended together. Nice work.
Comments from author:
Thanks - I was trying hard not to let either group's narrative dominate the story, I think it worked reasonably well.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [4 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunday and beyond" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Wonderful! I particularly loved Giles and Coulson working so well together (two cool, wise dudes, both fighting on the side of Good, bonding over sausages and beer!), and I'd love to read a sequel, following up on Ethan's new allegiance to Loki.
Comments from author:
I'm thinking of some sequel ideas, but not sure how well they'll work. I really don't want this to be one of those series where every Avengers case involves the supernatural, and the Council ends up spending most of its time dealing with Hydra. Both have other priorities.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunday and beyond" from ShyBob
Review:
Good show! This got about 4 LOLs per chapter due to excellent dialogue between members of both Team Asgard and Team Midgard. Bonus points for Giles & Coulson, and triple word score for including Vi :)
Comments from author:
Vi's clothing choices plus Felicia Day's real-life activities makes the comparison with Darcy fairly obvious - really couldn't resist having them meet.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunday and beyond" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Nice story.

Really cool how they got HYDRA to do themselves in. Too bad they only got the techies. (Didn't they learn anything from Call of Cthulu? You NEVER read the books aloud!)
Comments from author:
The trouble with spies is that they will insist on finding out Things That Man Was Not Meant To Know. I think it's part of the job description...
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sunday and beyond" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
oooh the plot thickens! Nicely done.
Comments from author:
About as thick as it'll get this time around, though I may return to this general universe some time. If only to show a training montage with Vi and Mjolnir...
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [25 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunday and beyond" from DianeCastle
Review:
Nicely done. I particularly liked Giles' revenge on the HYDRA complex. Ethan vs. HYDRA would also have made a good story on its own.
Comments from author:
Oh, Ethan isn't done with Hydra, but he hasn't exactly forgiven Giles etc. either. He's going to annoy everyone (possibly including Loki eventually)!
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [25 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thursday" from EnergyBeing
Review:
If Ethan didn't pay for something in '98, why would the debt be in guineas? Unless you meant guinea pigs...

Anyway, good story.
Comments from author:
Some British antique shops etc. still price things in guineas, where 1 guinea =£1.05 - it's just supposed to look classier.
Review By [EnergyBeing] • Date [25 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunday and beyond" from raxadian
Review:
I just knew Ethan had a plan about the slayers. Now, depowering slayers would be too plain, making them mad would be too easy, slaving them? Don't think Diana would agree, maybe a test?

Think about it, Diana passing judgement to all Slayers, it would keep them busy.
Comments from author:
He never really used the Diana statue for anything, he just hung onto it because it's beautiful and valuable. I suspect it will end up in Loki's collection in Asgard.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunday and beyond" from Amberdrake
Review:
I really enjoyed this. D& D are pure evil. :)
Comments from author:
They both know Ian and which buttons to press. Fortunately both of them still like him to varying extents, so they aren't vicious about it.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [25 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saturday" from raxadian
Review:
You could have gone by demon slayer. After all, if you think about it, in old times people did not go out at night alone or invite strangers into their homes. And they usually did rituals so the dead didn't raise back and so on. So in fact back them, the Slayer would have hunt more demons than vampires.
Comments from author:
It lacks something, I think, and since the Norwegian version is closest to Norse I went with that.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saturday" from Hecatonchires
Review:
Liking Dawn & Darcy byplay :). And those are some narrow boats o_o
Comments from author:
More D, D, & I in the final part.

"Narrowboat" is the designation for boats that will fit through the entirety of the UK canal system, 7ft wide and some maximum length I can't off- hand remember. There are also traditional designs which distinguish them from other boats that happen to fit. They were originally horse-drawn, now usually diesel.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [25 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saturday" from Caira
Review:
So, it's on like . . .
Review By [Caira] • Date [24 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saturday" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
great fic so far.
Comments from author:
Thanks - final part is written, should get it up tomorrow.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [24 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saturday" from JasonBarnett
Review:
is there a word for demon? or monster? On the show they could have just as easily called her the "demon slayer" or the "monster slayer"
Comments from author:
I think they needed a word that could easily be dubbed in instead of Vampire Slayer, so that the lip sync wasn't too far out.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [24 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saturday" from FireWolfe
Review:
This was a very fun chapter I look forward to seeing more soon. I think that Buffy would do well with the captain as a lover and I kind of like the idea of Hawkeye and Dawn for some reason. Of course I also love the idea of Loki and Buffy because I so think that she could turn him around like she did with Spike.
Comments from author:
Sorry... I don't think I'll be shipping anyone especially; I've never really bought into the idea that someone like e.g. Captain America will meet Buffy and instantly fall in love because (a) he's still in love with Peggy, (b) he has issues on his issues, and (c) there are other women he likes and meets on a regular basis, such as Natasha and his neighbour in CA:TWS.

Similarly, Dawn is based in Britain and has a busy academic career (which she is shamefully neglecting for the current emergency) which means she won't really be available for dates with someone based in the USA on a regular basis.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [24 Jul 14] • Not Rated
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