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Review of chapter "Rescue" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter. Xander shooting Spike was a nice touch - and the stake going through two vampires and then Buffy was somehow fitting too. Back to the drawing board, it is! Good take on Cordelia and on Willow's snooping.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rescue" from Bobboky
Review:
nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rescue" from DavidEmpey
Review:
Fun, fun, fun. I had to Google "trapezius" to figure out where Xander hit Buffy. I'm guessing that she will Have Words with him after she deals with Dru. Frankly I'm surprised Giles, and Willow, and Angel, and Cordelia, didn't yell at him. But I do like that you're not making Xander into Super!Xander (who is also often UnmitigatedJerk!Xander).
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rescue" from ChefJackButler
Review:
I'm surprised Buffy didn't react to being holed.

And even smart Xander is a dumbass. Yay!
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [20 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rescue" from hamishog
Review:
It seems that Xander is also channeling Tony's incredible tactical abilities since he open fired while friendlies were in the zone. Sheesh. Do what you can but don't open up with an automatic weapon when you've got your own downrange. And I think he now sees the disadvantage of the charge mode. Although he could up the ampage on that and make it an offensive weapon. Make vampires ears bleed. I'm glad he is showing proper respect for his minion though. Willow's put up with a lot of his crap. She's his Pepper all right.
Review By [hamishog] • Date [20 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Infiltration" from Elleria
Review:
Love this!
Comments from author:
Mahalo
Review By [Elleria] • Date [15 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Infiltration" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
It's all fun an LARPs until someone get a bat to the back of the head!
Comments from author:
"I thought you said vampire bats, Marvin!" "My name is Diego now! *swing*" =)
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Infiltration" from Oxnate
Review:
...It auto-loads the next ministake when you shoot." -- LOL. When I first read this, I thought it loaded the next 'mistake' when she shot. :-)
Comments from author:
I saw that on the first re-read ("write drunk, edit sober." -Hemmingway) and almost changed it to mini-stake. I decided to leave it, because it could be a mistake, after all. =)
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Infiltration" from Starfox
Review:
Another plan that doesn't survive contact with the (delusional) civilians. Too bad about the problems with the railgun, but it does add some realism that Xander can't produce a perfect weapon in the first try.
Comments from author:
He'll fix it for her, eventually. If he makes it out of the Sunset Club...
Review By [Starfox] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Infiltration" from DavidEmpey
Review:
Fun, fun, fun.

+1 for the cliffhanger. (-oo if you never update again!!!!!)

What's next for our heroes? Will Buffy arrive in time? Will Xander and Will become vampire snax? Will Xander's stake thrower work? To find out, tune in to the next exciting episode of "In Stark Contrast"!
Comments from author:
*takes his +1 and disappears over the horizon, cackling madly* =)

Same Stark time, same Stark channel!
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Infiltration" from hamishog
Review:
Once again we are treated to why Xander isn't allowed to go undercover. Willow, neither. Although I do hope she does see that Xander adores her. He's a schmuck but he does adore her.
On the other hand there's got to be a reason that the combined IQ of the clientele at the Sunset Club is so comparatively low.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Worse, he's a schmuck with memories of being Mr. Suave Ladykiller. That's got to cause some cognitive dissonance. =)
Review By [hamishog] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Infiltration" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Comments from author:
Gracias
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lie to Someone Else" from DavidEmpey
Review:
I'm enjoying this very much. No constructive criticism to offer, I'm afraid, but I'm eager to read what happens next.
Comments from author:
That sort of feedback is the coin of the realm, as they say. So thank you. =)
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [11 Sep 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lie to Someone Else" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
"In Stark Contrast"...I do believe this contrast is beginning to show itself in more ways than one. ..intellectually, magickally and socially.

As for the different colours of Xander during the diagnostic spell, I might postulate that this is due to the Halloween event's influence, as a sort of "overlay" of Tony Stark on top of Xander's self...for lack of a better description. This could possibly mean that Xander, or Tony, or both are magickally inclined, and future events will bear that out. After the Billy Fordham episode plays itself out, that is...
Comments from author:
One crisis at a time, indeed. Xander has had a lot of stuff happen to him, magically.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [9 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Begin Scenario" from purrfus
Review:
Intriguing costume shop sequence.
Comments from author:
Xander makes an interesting point of view character.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [8 Sep 14] • Not Rated
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