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Review of chapter "The Dork Age" from Starfox
Good chapter. I do hope Willow's Halloween echos will manifest and turn her a bit more to the sexy side.
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"...and then Ford shows up, he has cancer. Oh! And stop messing around with boys! Here's a memory of the lesyay side." =)
Review By [Starfox] • Date [20 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dork Age" from Bobboky
Nice work
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Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dork Age" from RoyalTwinFangs
Not bad.
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Go raibh maith agat
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [19 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dork Age" from hamishog
But he is Xander, not Tony. Baseline may be there but he's going to use his own experiences to interpret. The most important thing to remember is that while he got Tony's memories that doesn't mean that he's going to see Tony's life in the same way.
For one thing, Tony was a drunk and so are Xander's parents so he's not going to romanticize that aspect of his life. As the son of two alcoholics Xander has a predisposition to substance abuse so it's a slippery slope that he wants to avoid in his continuing quest to not become his father.
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Very well said.
Review By [hamishog] • Date [19 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dork Age" from CageFire
An okay chapter. I'll be looking forward to reading more.
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Same Stark time, same Stark channel. This one was sort of a transition between episodes.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [19 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dork Age" from raxadian
Less Xander, more Tony, Tony is prideful anf ego filled, he would not let others rhink he is dumb.
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Xander sure would, though. I am not sure what you are saying, here, actually...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [19 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moving Day" from mendal
The nid will probably assume that he held a critical component back.
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Cheaters always suspect everyone else of cheating, of course.
Review By [mendal] • Date [19 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moving Day" from slmncpm
i can't wait to see what he gets up to!
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I believe he will be attending the shenanigans.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moving Day" from Bobboky
Nice work
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Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moving Day" from Starfox
Good chapter. Nice revelation about the proecss Xander sold - he conned a con man, well done! I also loved Willow showing more signs of her Halloween "gift".
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He adapted the Honey Trap idea to his own purposes =)
Review By [Starfox] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moving Day" from Bobboky
very good work
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Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moving Day" from kazimo
Great iron man/buffy story, especially with the stargate aspects. I wonder if they might leak some of hte jaffa armor, like those metal shifting helmets. I love the image of powered armor for earth. also, naquada mixed with arc reactor tech will be epic, so possible power issues will be solved.
Not only powered armor, but Malps and smal vehicles and aircraft deployable through the gate. THe possibilities are endless.
If the watchers finance xanders projects, then England might be brought in to the sgc earlier. If they have any alien goodies collected over the years, xander coulkd backwards enginneer them. The items if bought to him, dont automaticly mean alien, so they could be brought to deal with his help.
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All great ideas. I have been thinking about some of them already, assuming the story goes that far.
Review By [kazimo] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moving Day" from Vianca
Ted & The Book Demon, meaning Xander will possibly have to check one research place at the minimum.
I mean, it gives him both resources and a new way of doing things.
One low tech, one high tech.
Perfect for his personal gear, especially if he needs to alter things in order to make it even work.
So no easy way to get Andaminium(?), you know, the type of metal Wolverine his claws were made from and it's variations.

Why do I see Ted getting reprogrammed?
He needs to lose his murderous ways and know that magic is real, for the last, it's handy that Xander has that detector.
Say, does it mean that Xander might be able to create a magical engine and spell emmiter, using his magical detector as a basis?

Back then, there were no tablets and so, perfect marketing angle.
Ad some barrings made from ultra durable metals and.....
I would also suggest using his hand rail stake gun (what ever) to make a magnetic catapult for aircraft-carriers and a railgun for frigates & so.
Patenting his Iron Man armor it's energy emmiters could net him quite a bit of money, specially if he can ad in somekinda power source.

Just think of alk the jet fighters that have their whole engine system replaced.
Hell, that should let him be able to let a F22 land vertically as if it was a F35.
Suggest using the YF23 for this experimental modification, if you go that way.
If you also place those emmitters as if they were RCS thrusters, might let you give the plane some aditional manouvrability(?).

Think it over.
Also, if Xander ever ends up in the past with Carter, let them get the Arrow jet fighter with it's missile loadout, their blueprints.

Now I want to see Xander on the Destiny, just to see his impact on it, after-all, that scout/gate-factory ship shield be able to create spareparts after a little reprogramming, right?
But for the real fun, it can´t be the period the Destiny mission was in, how else can the Destiny get home on time?
I bet the other two scout ships can dock under either side of it´s wing.

Second Edit:
Thats why you should look into the Book Demon, he brainwashed people to build him a robot body with somekinda fusion reactor, ad a certain research place.

Third Edit:
As far as I remember, they beheaded him and destroyed the head, the body should still be there, though.
And then there is all the production data in the CNC machines and so.
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Ted seems like the first LMD, and could be a source for all kinds of stuff.

The detector (and the results from Miss Calendar's magic potential detecting spell) will play a pretty big role in things.

If he comes up with a power source comparable to the ARC reactor, he might be able to go ahead with repulsor lift stuff.

The Scooby Gang might never encounter the SGC, and if there is time travel, I am pretty much obligated to send Xander to revolutionary France at this point. =)

EDITED TO ADD: I wonder if the parts were ever recovered after they blew him up? I don't think it was ever mentioned, unlike the Buffybot...
Review By [Vianca] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moving Day" from Michaelsuave
Good story thus far. I hope this xander as stark goes further than the other ones that tend to peter out. Cheers!
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I know where it is going for a while yet, so no petering, hopefully. Thanks!
Review By [Michaelsuave] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Moving Day" from RoyalTwinFangs
Not Xander just need to find the right formula.
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He has some Science! to do to figure it out, so that will give him a happy.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Not Rated
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