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Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from SamuraiSky
Review:
Excellent story! I enjoyed reading it.
Comments from author:
Thank-you very much.

D.
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [17 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from Chan
Review:
Humm... I could see this growing from friends to more for cordy she's probably not in much of a trusting mood after all that and buffy would understand it having experienced it herself ah well just a thought we'll see what a sequel makes of the dynamics.
Comments from author:
We will, but you might have to wait a while, I don't want to rush into anything!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Chan] • Date [9 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from OlBear
Review:
Another excellent story, thank you for sharing. Hopefully there's a sequel in the works which shows how the new relationships, Amy/Willow lovers and Buffy/Cordelia friendship, will affect the 'Scooby' dynamic.
Comments from author:
I've written two chapters of a sequel just to get the ideas out of my head, Unfortunately the rest might take a while because I've got to think real hard about the next story. I've also got a lot of unfinished fics I'd like to finish before starting anything new!

Don't worry if/when I get round to it all the dinamics will be covered!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [9 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from AllenPitt
Review:
that was one weird story. But interesting! Huh. If Cordelia is pregnant, will she keep the child? If keep, it's likely half-alien. That might get weird later on.
So this is a timeline with Star Trek in its future, eventually Kirk finds them and we get that episode? Weird. Makes one wonder if Khan/Eugenics Wars are in the near future. Who knows, maybe Cordelia/Buffy were 'altered' a bit. Longer-lived now, maybe? Just a thought.
Poor Angel. Looks like there's no romance in Sunnydale in his future. Then again he'd likely be happiest with a resurrected Darla, if she had a soul.
Comments from author:
Ok, second attempt at commenting, the first vanished along with the site!

Yep this is in the same reality as Kirk. We just have to pretend that the Eugenics wars are a covert war and so on, because if memory serves they should be happening in Buffy's now.

I might make some mention of it if I do the sequel.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from Vianca
Review:
Hopefully this ain't the end of the story.
Because I can see a possibility of it continue-ing.
Comments from author:
There's a definite possibility of a sequel.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Vianca] • Date [8 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from djhardim
Review:
By any chance will the treatment Buffy received make her grow a few inches?

Will this Buffy take up with Angel? For that matter, since Willow is involved with Amy, will she encourage Buffy's relationship with Angel?
Comments from author:
Ah Angel, as the saying goes. If I do do the sequel Angel will make a (short) appearance in it.

Buffy grows up as well as out, hmm, I'd not thought of that but you never know.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [8 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from AceDreamer
Review:
Hmm. I'm afraid I don't find that a convincing ending...

Now, if Willow'd worked with Amy, using critical parts of the insect remote, and something like a 'path finding' spell, that might be a bit more convincing. Particularly if the Fertility Idol was carefully dealt with on their return - maybe putting a blindness (takes out its sensors) and speechless (stops the communicate with 'home') spell on it, and later binding those spells down with a greater ritual?

Still, otherwise it worked.

Waiting to see what you do next!
( Lost In Space (the series), Weird Science (the film)? TRON? :)
Comments from author:
See my comment to jack's comment a bit further down the page.

If I do another story set in this reality I'll do more thinking before i start writing!

Lost in Space? That's the one on TV from years ago?

Weird Science? Hmm laughed at the film but not xover material.

Tron? Never watched it.

Next up to post...an 'Ultimate force' xover.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [AceDreamer] • Date [8 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from Mcspender
Review:
At least Blue Brain did used those grey cells and sended home those pesky humans.
Poor Cordy, she's gonna need her new friends a lot, but she'll get by with a little help of her friends =).
Oy, Amy and Willow, those love birds are so cute xD.
Good luck explaning the slayer Giles, yer gonna need it :O.

Cool fic, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Yep, things are sure going to be interesting around Sunnydale for a while!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [7 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from Rich
Review:
Ah yes, the famous "Deus ex Machina" option, which would bother me except that :

A. I don't see any other way to do it, and

B. ST:The Original Series did stuff like that all the time.

Overall, a pretty good crossover, and fun to read.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I agree...I'll watch out for the same problem if I do a sequel.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Rich] • Date [7 Sep 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
I am always a bit surprised at how fast some endings can go. Even so, this was a satisfying conclusion, I think. And, I have to say, I really, really liked AU *good* Mrs. Madison.

So, thank you :)
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

Myself I thought it could have been better but...

Mrs Madison, if I write a sequel, will have a larger part.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [7 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from raxadian
Review:
Is too late for Cordy to abort?
Comments from author:
As Buffy and Cordy have only been away for about a week, perhaps two. We're not 100% sure Cordy is in fact pregnant. You'll have to look out for the sequel if I write it.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [7 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like how you solved the crisis, but set the characters forward on a slightly twisted future.
Comments from author:
I'd wanted to end this with a fight but it didn't turn out that way. However, it has set things up for a sequel.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen." from ChefJackButler
Review:
That ended a lot more abruptly than I thought it would, and there was no all-encompassing mass melee. That's a bit unsatisfying.
Comments from author:
Unfortunately it was an unintended consequence of how the story developed. Originally there was going to be a major fight near the end. Then the thought struck me that I couldn't destroy the Providers because then they'd not be lying in wait for Kirk in two hundred years time.

If I write another of these stories its something I'll have to look out for...in fact I think I might have thought of a way around it if i go through with the idea. I've the first two intro chapters written, chapter three could go anywhere!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [7 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from texaswookie
Review:
All of the girls manage to get out, but the guys are stuck in their cell still. I could so see that happening in a BTVS episode. In fact I'm pretty sure we did see that a time or two.
Comments from author:
Yep, you're not wrong.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen." from Valy
Review:
Wow a lot of things are happening fast. I hope they can escape, but somehow I think that they are still very much under estimating the high technology. But they might be the first to use magic to escape. Wonder where they can go.

Another great chapter and looking forward to the next. thank you for creating this story.
Janissa
Comments from author:
Thank-you very much.
D.
Review By [Valy] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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