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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Past Donor)Ponder
Review:
Your story got served up to me when I clicked on the "random under-reviewed story" link.

This one has both of the same problems I mentioned in the last review I sent to you on one of your other stories. I don't know if you'll ever see this, but just in case, you should check out these links:

http://mrbraiman.home.att.net/page25.html
http://www.itsuckstobejoe.com/Jdn/writing/punctuation.html
http://www.rachelsimon.com/wg_appendix.php
http://www.tthfanfic.org/guide.php
http://www.palidormedia.com/james/editor/lesson1.html
http://www.writing-world.com/fiction/dialogue.shtml

I see many authors who make these and similar mistakes (and they are indeed mistakes, in all English-speaking countries), so I've collected that set of links that cover the issue, and explain it from different angles. They each have their strengths and weaknesses, so I keep them all handy.

*** Ponder
Review By [(Past Donor)Ponder] • Date [19 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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