Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from Joyful
Review By [Joyful
] • Date [12 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from Thelxiepia
I love Jack in the future! Teehee. I hope you update soon :)
Review By [Thelxiepia
] • Date [20 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from CallmemasterKent
Great stuff! Jack in the 21at century...I love it! Buffy makes me crazy...she's trying to control Dawn who's in a situation that in many ways parallels Buffy's High School existence...and she should know better than anyone that destiny takes shotgun and mother figures have to sit in the back seat...(please go with me on that long winded flowery explanation)
Review By [CallmemasterKent
] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from SomethingWicked
Ah, I really didn't expect to see that you hadn't updated in so long but hopefully with the spure of the new Pirates movie you'll get on with it soon. .
Please make this a Jack/Dawn fic. Please?!
(giggles) He said Icky!
Review By [SomethingWicked
] • Date [11 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from spikeismine
Pretty good. I would never have guessed Jack as the geometry type, or school type at all. Please update soon.
Review By [spikeismine
] • Date [9 Jul 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from killjoy
Ok first off let me say that Jack is cracking me up LOL.The way he's starting to get everyone to like him and how that's pissing Buffy off is to damn funny.Second I always hate how much of a hypocrite Buffy is on how she treats Dawn.Dawn's comment on how 'when you were my age you were sneaking off to be with your two hundred year old vampire boyfriend..." had me clapping and going 'you go girl'. Xander and Jack getting drunk had me ROTFLMAO.But it's the whole Jack/Dawn thing I like.They go good together.And I think that's the main thing that has Buffy so mad all the time lol.
Review By [killjoy
] • Date [12 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from Jewel
Love this - really hope you continue it
Review By [Jewel
] • Date [7 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from FicChick
I saw ... I read ... I giggled (a lot). Seriously though, it has a good plot that works in the context of both universes, which is quite a challenge when crossing two worlds set in different time periods. Keep up the good work.
However I did find one continuity error -- when Dawn was discussing their ages in her bedroom she referred to herself as being fifteen, but earlier you said that a couple of years had passed and she was now seventeen.
Review By [FicChick
] • Date [29 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from Baibre
oh *snerk* this is just too too funny...you reaaally captured Glory...really...hee...i love this.
Review By [Baibre
] • Date [30 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from PleaseDeleteAccount
Good story. There are a couple of things that are confusing me, though. At the end of the previous story, just after Dawn came back, it was stated that 3 years had passed since Glory had been defeated. That would mean that Dawn is 18. In this story, however, Dawn is 17. I'm a little confused on that front. Also, in chapter 8, Dawn told Jack that she was 15, which can't be right.
Anyways, besides the whole age thing, it's a really good story. Your characterization of Jack is perfect and I love how you've made Dawn. She's really well rounded. I can't imagine how Dawn could think that Jack is old. I'm only 18 and I can appriciate the utter deliciousness that is Captian Jack Sparrow. Didn't she have a crush on Spike who's like 150 years old? Eh, I guess I'm biased, though, being that I have the biggest crush on Jack. I look forward to the next chapter. Update soon.
Review By [PleaseDeleteAccount
] • Date [2 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from Jessia
You've got to write more. This just isn't fair to leave everyone hanging... :)
Review By [Jessia
] • Date [28 May 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from JoyousTrouble
I love the whole thing... very very cool...
Review By [JoyousTrouble
] • Date [6 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Problem Solving" from Nightwind
“You’ll thank me when you find out the answer on your own.” LOL! That statement is guranteed to irritate just about anyone when you say it.
I wonder how Jack will deal with meeting Spike (if he is still around), after all Spike is preaty close to Dawn, even if he doesn't like to admit it.
Review By [Nightwind
] • Date [10 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "VII - The Key, the Chosen and the Compass" from Kristen
Ok, I just read the prequel to this and all the parts of this story. I'm amazed. You've managed to create a very interesting story behind Dawn about what she is and does and tied it all in nicely with the movie. You've given me lots to ponder with this latest chapter. I can't wait to read more. Will there be a Dawn/Jack ship in this story? I hope so. Please update soon!
Review By [Kristen
] • Date [3 Mar 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "VII - The Key, the Chosen and the Compass" from jammiesMM
Loved your explaination about Dawn and the time/space stuff. It is cool she chose Jack to be a champion..... *LOL* bet that sits well with the 'pirate'. I like how you have Dawn saying that it is time for them to start protecting each other I mean Dawn is older now she is not a kid (well actually she is older then all of them ... hehehe) But I have alway thought that Buffy or somebody should have taught Dawn how to defend herself instead of just complaining that she would get in the way. I guess that is why she was not my fav on the show because she was always trying to help and not really being able to do anything. But if someone would have showed her maybe it would not have been so bad. I am not saying she needed to be out there slaying but she could have at least been able to defend herself. When you think about it the 'last line of defense' for Dawn is Dawn herself.... I mean if all else fails Dawn should be able to protect herself and keep others from 'using her power' it is nice that others protect her but in the end her best protection is herself. *sigh* babbling again this not being able to find a job sucks I stay up late and then babble like Willow in my reviews *sorry* the good thing is if I didn't like it so well I wouldn't be typing so much *LOL* uppdate soon can't wait until they go back. They are going back right? is Buffy going too? Love to see her in Jack's time 'getting others to show her how well they do with a sword' *smirk*
Review By [jammiesMM
] • Date [13 Feb 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]