Oh that is hilarious and very cool. I would love to see a follow up of this and Xander be the one to try to explain to her that she is a Slayer. Talk about a shock and a half.
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [27 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is excellent. Either by itself or as a beginning to a longer story. The last lines are just right. I can really imagine Luna thinking that, it seems to fit. The bits about the slayer were both clever and funny and I can only imagine Ron's reaction to the reality. :-)
I'm going to agree with MR. This story is perfectly complete as it is. I like Luna's description of the slayer. Sounds kind of like a Polgara demon. Nice twist at the end.
Review By [renelf] • Date [27 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]