Brilliant! :) I like it. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. :) Awesome job writing this as well.
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)

I love it, it's unlike anything i have read before.
Please write a sequel!!

that was a pretty sad place Buffy was in. It seems a little odd that she goes willingly to becoming a vamp. She was always afraid of becoming a vampire wasn't she? and becoming soulless. This is a pretty dark story. It seems like Angel would come because of his prior claim on her or something. That might make an interesting second chapter. Angel or Spike coming to town. I like your (is it s ficklett or story or what do we call the short ones?) It seems strange though her turning to evil at the end. I would think that if she really wanted to die she would have looked for an end a little more permanent that might allow her back into heaven. Also no matter how dark and depressed she got she never would have wanted to become evil. I guess one of the things I loved about Buffy was that she always pulled herself together no matter how bad it got. This kind of feels to much like her giving up in a very big way. (Oh this sounds like I am bashing and I am totally not I really do like it) These are just the things that seem to keep me from loving it. you know?