Review of chapter "Part the Fifth" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Another gripping chapter -- and I'm fascinated by the inside look at some of the not-evil Slytherins and their personal and family trials (I've never read the books -- just seen the movies, except for the most recent one).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Well, you answered my question and then left another cliffy... Why does Ron have to be such a douche? Throwing her cloak at/over her is sooo old. Well till next chapter and please no more cliffs??.. I'm still trying to figure out WHO is standing behind them....
Review By [Eureka] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part the Third" from wickedness
Review:
Woohoo, finally updated! Is it bad that I want Blaise and Luna to get together and leave Ron hanging? A boy doesn't deserve someone he's overlooked and been so careless towards. Granted, he has always been dense when it came to feelings, but it's inexcusable that he only realizes he should treat girls better when they put some makeup and flouncy clothes on (e.g. Hermione at the Yule Ball and Luna in this story).
Lovely writing, though~
Review By [wickedness] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
OK girl, you gotta come back and finish this one. You left it kinda cliff hangerish.... So Luna fancies Ron, and Ron of course is oblivious. TILL Dawn, Gin, and Hermione transform her. (wolf-whistle) Ron sees her and presto he likes what he sees... BUT does he do anything about it????
Review By [Eureka] • Date [19 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]