Oooo, this is really good! very interesting. I never even considered Max, Liz and Tess together, but I'm definitely liking this story. I also really like the idea of Michael and Liz being siblings, again, nothing I've ever seen before, but interesting. Please say you plan on continuing this! I can't wait to see what happens next!

~ Kyra

I know I have told you before that this is a really great story, that it has well written and true to character characters, a good plot, and interesting well crafted ( ,maybe even romantic, ) love scene flashes; and all that and more is still true, very true.

.....thought if you do not continue with this story you are going to driven me insane and kill me. So please be kind and continue with this story. If it were legal I would pay you to continue but alas it is not. SO will you settle for me BEGGING, borrowing or stealing in an attempt to get you to write more of this fabulous story?

I love this story, or rather what there is of it; and I have reread it many times waiting for it to be finished. Please continue with it as soon as RealLife allows.

I have to ask you, are you trying to tortue or kill or drive insane you faithful readers? You have so far writen such a good, interesting and different story and then you leave us hanging here with NO updates for the last 13 months. Please do not leave this story unfinished, that would be very cruel.

I am still enjoying your story a lot. It was a bit odd at first, but I can actually now see the three of them as a Trio. But, please, let us find out what is going on. What is Liz? Is she one of the Aliens or is she really a Human who just happens to be the reincarnation of their lost love? How will the Trio's relationship change their relationships with all the others in their group, both Alien and Human? OK, I guess I can wait while you give us all warm fuzzies and a nice story. But I do hope you explain all the mysteries somday. Lol!

*Sigh of happy feelings* Thanks. That chapter was just what I needed right now. The idea that everything will work out in the end, despite all the opposition and bad stuff. =]

Yeah, yeah? And then what? What's next? Oooh, I just need some more. This story has me all tied up in knots, waiting for the next update. It is just so good! =]

Great, great chapter! You've actually got me liking Tess, and I used to hate her. Don't know how you pulled that one off, but it's really impressive. Like the characters, spot on as always. Loved Kyle, starting the whole mess with his total cluelessness. (is that a word? Ah, well, it is now) I loved the Lis Tess interaction, and I usually aren't into slash, which at this point I guess it is. Since Max isn't there yet. But again you've managed to get me hooked on something that I (usually) avoid. Thanks for a wonderful new chapter.

Tals

No kidding, long night! But it will be worth it. Heck, it would be worth it just to see a bit more Liz/Tess-age. =] Poor Max must be so confused right now. I hope you write fast, so that he won't have to suffer too long. =D (Yes, that was shameless begging for another update as soon as you can manage.) And I hope Iz gives Michael a real earful for his "dramatic flair" there. I do so love this story.

I love the last line. I'm still not sure what is going on, but I am still enjoying your story. I just hope we can find out what is going on pretty soon now. Until then, I hope you keep up the good work.

Oh my . . . as if things weren't already tense enough. Whew! Thank you for yet another enchanting chapter of this wonderful story. I can't wait to read what happens next. =] And, I have to admit that I too could be "down with" a bit more of Liz and Tess "going at it." Please.

Right. first, sorry I haven't reviewed before. I definitely should have, cause this story is just to great not to review. I have just been so damn busy that I never got around to it. Sorry. Right, on to the review. Wow! This is just wow... And what a wonderful way to resolve the Tess/Liz/Max triangle. Although I am sure there'll be loads of other problems popping up. I mean, you've already hinted that Michael's reaction might not be too good. And what about Is and Max? And well, even Tess and Lis will probably have some adjusting to do. It is a pretty big step after all.

I loved Kyle walking in on them. God, I wished I could have seen the look on his face! It must have been priceless! The pace of this story is just right. And the dialogue and flow is just right. In character and and extremly well written. (as all your stories by the way. Pretty much confirms my suspicion that you are one hell of a writer!) And the scene with Michael realising that he had a family. That was beautiful. He was always an outsider in the group of aliens, and although he was family he was always alone at the same time. It's great to see him with a new sister. And the character of Lysha is just perfectly worked into the Alien lives of Zan and therest of the gang. And it is very fitting that Liz has a connection with the royal four.

Beautiful, well written, well plotted story, which is both original, intriguing and engaging. 3 dimensional characters and introspective parts into the heads of Liz and Michael. Thanks for sharing.

Tals

OK, so I don't have much intelligent to say here, but I want to thank you for yet another great chapter. I was, I admit, a bit worried that it would be Max or maybe even Iz that walked in on them during their smooch-fest, but Kyle's reaction is pretty funny. I'll have you know that the whole pinching yourself to see if you are dreaming doesn't work. You most definitely CAN feel pain while dreaming. I've woken up from dreams to a residual pain from an incident in the dream. But that's neither here nor there. It was still funny. =]

I really like this story. Your characters are different from, yet much like, the characters on the show. Your plot is fascinating and totally whacked. Lol! I look forward to more of this delightful story.

Whew! Is it hot in here, or is it just Liz and Tess? =] Thanks so much for the update. I am really enjoying this story, and can't wait for more. Fun ride!